Oml..This is self punishment..
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Thread Topic: Oml..This is self punishment..
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damn, then i guess the best thing i can do is keep talking to you. so lets get to know each other. im 14, i live in the us(sadly with the president we have) my name is james frost (dont care if u call me jack or frosty)im 5'6, as u can see i like boston, thats where i am from originally.
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I'm Rhiannon, I live on the Wisconsin-Illinois border, but live in Wisconsin. I'm a girl, and I'm 13. I take advanced classes in school, and I like to think of myself as relatively smart. I'm vegetarian and am a human and animal rights activist.
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yay ive been looking for someone that dosent like to harm an animal
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Also I'm currently dwelling over the conclusion sentence of my weekly assignment. It just isn't right.
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here let me help i love writing and poetry
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Im a dick XD. The conclusion is a summary and the sentence is the image you wish to leave your audience with. Sometimes questions are best sara, or just a showing of difference and how bout that for change
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yeah you are a dick XD jk
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I edited and I think it improved a lot.
All in all, Scrooge is a malicious, selfish and avaricious character; One that haunts you with his ceaseless immorality. But will he stay that way? -
Also here's the introduction
Someone help me with this
A colorful character, Ebenezer Scrooge is portrayed as a stingy, bitter, selfish and cold man. -
yeah that looks good. keep that version
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very good intro too
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The intro will be the death of me
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why?how long are u staying on here
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10:03, this nights going by slow
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I don't like it.
I'll be on for about another ten minutes.
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