Jinx( if you still want me to try to help you)
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Thread Topic: Jinx( if you still want me to try to help you)
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cody17 Newbie
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I'm still here. XD
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cody17 NewbieLike I said .I'm not the best but I'll try.
I see this as a challenge for me.( teaching)
First for basics choose a subject.
Life, flowers, even yourself.
Take it slowly and use your time .
I will continue after you choose a subject. -
Life
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cody17 NewbieOK.
Life.
There many things you could do here.
Loom at music .music is just poetry in song.
Music does not always rhyme.
Remember practice helps.
Now in the form of poetry, tell me a little about life. -
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Life,
Is like an hourglass,
Flowing freely in time,
But in time it will pass,
In the blink of an eye. -
cody17 NewbieSee. Was that too hard.
You know figurative language.
You can replace rhymes with that like you did above
"Life is an hourglass." Simile
Try using personification and a metaphor or simile. -
The sun rain down like soft summer rain.
This is the gift,
Life brings -
cody17 NewbieGood.
Gift life brings .personification in a way.
Try making a haiku.
They do not rhyme.
5-7-5
3 lines those are the syllables in each.
5 first 7 second 5 last -
I was never good with those.
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cody17 NewbieOkay
Take your time I'm not rushing you -
Let's try something else besides a haiku
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cody17 NewbieJust try something .
Do a normal poem.
Just let loose how you dfeel -
My heart breaks in thin, thin lines
It so hard to feel what it's like
To run in circles miles at a time
Breaking and breaking. -
cody17 NewbieYou're good at this though
Just take time to write and think
Don't be afraid to say how you feel.
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