need some feedback for the story in the library
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He swung me by my hair and pulled a gun to my forehead, yelling taunts and insults that I could not comprehend. I threw my hands up in surrender and let out a cry, a cry that would make a man stop motion just for his ruthless and unnecessary action. His eyebrows tensed down with his eyes and he looked down upon me with anger and he went near my face, which was stuck in a petrified expression.
"Wanna tell me exactly what you did, Floral?" Aztec asked.
I sputtered and tears were running down my cheeks. I wasn't crying that I could possibly get a bullet stuck in my brain any minute from now, but that I had betrayed the man that I was actually mutual with and a man that had true companionship. And I ruined it all, just because of the misconceptions.
"I-I don't know, Azzy.." I said and he clenched his teeth and pulled my hair harder, as possible for some of it to come off my scalp.
He got near my face even more and spoke through his frustration, almost as he was about to explode like TNT. "You know what you did, Floral. I knew I should have been hesitant about you. Pretty girls don't last long once they're in the minds of other men." Aztec said, and he breathed at his last words as if he had went through these experiences. I swallowed down the lump in my throat and I shook, my words coming out as unlegible as possible.
"B-but it was a misund-"
"Don't say that, Floral! You know that's what they all say when they don't want to be proven unguilty!" After that, we both stopped talking and the room filled with silence.
"I-I am sorry.." I said softly and he scoffed ungenuinely. The lump appeared and my urge to cry my eyes out even more was sufficient to a maximum.
"Now, you won't anymore Floral. You and I can forgot about this.." Aztec said and he looked at me, seemingly pulling the gun closer to my forehead as hes aid that. I took it as consideration though, as he was willing to stop being rageful and forgot all about this and everything can become peace as it was with the whole cheating lust fiasco and my mood softened.
"Really?" I looked at him with sincerity and did a half smile and I exhaled deeply.
He chuckled. "Of course, Hell always has it's virtues when it comes to lovely Floral that committed a just wonderful sin." He said at his cruel joke and my thoughts were just a wrenched dream that was shattered in seconds by the man that would be responsible for my quick death.
"So-"
"Exactly." He said and pulled the gun right on my forehead, his fingers right on the trigger. "Any last words?"
I was too shocked and scared to speak, so I shook my head and put my head down, waiting for myself to die. I heard his fingers pressing on the trigger and as he did, I closed my eyes and made my last prayers that I would not be damned to hell for the recent sin I had created, as I have always been a merciful woman. I was expecting a faint sound of a gunshot, but all I could hear was the door slamming open and the vigorous stomping feat of a hundred men, and they were men that were hereos, one that took in the leader's significant other as their own friend and once I peaked one of my eyes open to see them, I knew that they would have come even if the slightest feeling was there in my soul. 2015-01-20 20:37:53 -
WHY DIDN'T U DIE
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IDK U HAVE TO WAIT FOR MORE JUST WAIT A BIT IM FIGURING OUT WHAT SHOULD HAPPEN
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The end.
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no not the end midnight
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I looked up and I sighed with relief as Damask was there with his crew, in his usual tailored grey suit and black tie and his wavy brown hair all jelled up and curled in a heaving sexy mess on his head. He was holding a gun at Aztec and so was his following men, and they didn't flinch a bit when Aztec put his gun in their direction.
"Let Floral go, Aztec." Damask said firmly and he looked at me, with deep pity.
Aztec sneered and he looked at Damask. "You're a man of your own words Damask. You couldn't seem to let HER go once you were inside of her." Remembering what Damask did earlier made my cheeks grow a light shade of crimson.
Damask didn't care and he shook it off and he said one last time with such force that his voice almost cracked. "Let. Floral. Go." He had said.
"Okay, I will do as you wish, King Damask!" Aztec had mocked and as you know, he pushed me down onto the floor with fast force. -
would like to be f---ed by Azetc
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ew stop dark u nasty xD
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he's so strong tho
and pretty -
i know but he's a douchebag overall all the strong and oretty guys are pretty much douches jk not all but aztec is
notice how their names are all design patterns -
the best kind of man for me
I did, minus Damask -
no I'm just having a lot of fantasies about evil men
I didn't know ;w; -
oh jeez what are the evil guys names?
but but it is a very well-know design print ;~; -
idk
not to dark -
you dont even know, baka :P
well that's just you k .3.
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