I never realized just how much it would hurt

Thread Topic: I never realized just how much it would hurt

zeronightshade Advanced

11 years ago

To carve the names of my enemies and loved ones into my skin
Fortunately both are few and far in between
I take a heavy breath as I finish one more name
It takes a lot of effort to carve just a single letter
But I grow used to it as I continue on
The letters aren't very neat but what should that matter?
This is a f---ing razor blade, not a goddamn caligraphy pen
zeronightshade Advanced

11 years ago

I know at least one of you has read this.
Hephaestuschild Hot Shot

11 years ago

I just dunno how to respond.
Dark22978 Hot Shot

11 years ago

^
zeronightshade Advanced

11 years ago

Just critique it. :l
Dark22978 Hot Shot

11 years ago

i like the last sentence a lot
UnLoving Advanced

11 years ago

^
Hephaestuschild Hot Shot

11 years ago

It's interesting, in a good way.
Like dark said, I like the last sentence.
meerkat Novice

11 years ago

ive done it before so im just going to respond by simply saying,''I know''.

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