Brownieeeee
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Thread Topic: Brownieeeee
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Finally. Sorry this took so long, and honestly it's not as long as I would've liked, but I added some more detail and I think this one is much better quality writing :3
There was little sound besides the soft shuffle of her uneven footsteps and the ringing in her ears. Her vision blurred, and she stumbled, black stiletto heels battling her balance. Then she saw it. The fuzzy image of a large house, just close enough for her make it without falling. She hurried unsteadily to the front door, a small smile making it's way onto her lips as she pictured the owner of the house. Byakuya Togami. Rich snob, hated of all things fun, and the love of Alyssa's life. The girl knocked on the door, a devious plan forming in her alcohol-fogged mind. Her body wanted one thing, and her mind wasn't functioning enough to deny it. A little burst of happiness shot through the young woman as the aforementioned man opened the door. His turquoise eyes immediately narrowed, obvious disdain on his face as he saw how thoroughly drunk she was. "Alyssa..." His voice held a note of disappointment, but the blonde had come to expect this sort of thing from his violet-haired lover. The girl shuffled inside, swaying slightly. Byakuya sighed in exasperation, but gently took her hand and led her inside, sitting her down on the couch. He helped her take of the unnecessarily tall shoes, oblivious to the impatient look on Alyssa's face. He sat beside her in silence for a moment, before Alyssa finally had to say something. Her body was already quite heated, and being so close to him wasn't helping. "Byakuya..." She whispered his name, leaning against his side. He stiffened up as her warm lips made contact with the skin of his neck, kissing and suckling gently. Her hands went to his chest, roaming through the fabric of his pristine-pressed shirt. The blonde gritted his teeth, biting back a groan as her movements grew more sensual, more desperate...She wanted him so badly, and he could tell. The artist's actions were beginning to affect him, and he would admit that he wanted her too. Finally, when his pants began to grow a little too right for comfort, he snapped. Grabbing her wrists, he pinned her back on the couch. Alyssa whimpered, but she was loving every second. This time it was his lips that landed on her neck, sucking forcefully, and her whine escalated into a loud moan. Byakuya smirked, drawing back. "What's the matter? Now we're even." His husky tone made the woman beneath him squirm, overwhelmed with need. She pushed herself up and flipped then over, unceremoniously pulling his shirt open, nearly tearing the buttons off in the process. Her hands greedily returned to his now-bare chest, tracing the outlines of the taut muscles eagerly. Byakuya shuddered beneath her, a barely audible noise of pleasure leaving his lips. Alyssa's eyes lit up, delighted at hearing his pleasured little sound. Underneath her he looked so...vulnerable. Her hands traveled lower, fiddling with the zipper of his pants. She slid them down, along with his boxers, and grinned up at Byakuya, who rose again, insistent on being the dominant one. In a matter of minutes they were both undressed, Alyssa's glittery purple dress in a heap on the floor. Byakuya attacked her neck again, nipping and sucking, leaving his marks of ownership on her skin, works of art just like her tattoos. His hands caressed her body, skimming over her chest, her hips, her more intimate places... Both of them now were blushing and impatient, and Alyssa closed her eyes as he leaned over her, positioning himself at her entrance. She gasped as he thrust into her, and he closed his eyes as well, letting out another small noise. They'd both done this enough times that it didn't take long for her to adjust, and Alyssa gasped and moaned again as he pulled out and thrust back in. The moved together, gasping and groaning and calling each other's names in breathless whimpers. Alyssa finally felt something building up inside her, and one hard thrust forward she cried out wordlessly, reaching her climax. Byakuya followed quickly after, reaching his peak inside her. After a few moments of panting and regaining their senses (or at least Byakuya did- Alyssa was still quite drunk) he pulled out and laid beside her, gently wrapping his arms around her. She snuggled into his chest. "I love you..." She murmured. Byakuya blushed, and only when her breathing evened out into sleep did he reply. "I love you too." -
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yes
okay gonna read it now kthanks -
I'M SHAKING
My hands were all sweaty and I kept closing my eyes and sighing and now I'm laughing. xD It's so wonderful, thank you. -
I'm glad you liked it ^w^
I hope the laughing is a good thing? XD -
The laughing is a good thing, yes. xD
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Yay~
I hope it was accurate? The lines n stuff? I wasn't really sure about the ending and stuff, but in that one thing you posted in that thread in the library Byakuya was reluctant to say he loved her so I thought it would fit -
It was actually quite accurate, you got their clothes right (except Alyssa doesn't wear a dress, but you got it right with the purple).
There's the swirly-sleeve shirt with one part of the tanktop underneath popping out, then it stops when the bottom of the tank top pops out below the end of the purple overshirt, then a little bit of that "belt tattoo" and then there's an actual belt and skirt and yeah.
You got everything else pretty accurately. I'm impressed. -
Ah, well I assumed she'd wear a dress and heels to go out drinking, that's the only reason for that. ^-^'
Thank you~ -
Ohhhhh. Then yes, she'd wear a dress. I guess you did get everything accurately.
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Yay~ X3 I'm very happy you enjoyed it :3
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My most favorite part of the story is this.
She pushed herself up and flipped then over, unceremoniously pulling his shirt open, nearly tearing the buttons off in the process. Her hands greedily returned to his now-bare chest, tracing the outlines of the taut muscles eagerly. Byakuya shuddered beneath her, a barely audible noise of pleasure leaving his lips. Alyssa's eyes lit up, delighted at hearing his pleasured little sound. Underneath her he looked so...vulnerable. Her hands traveled lower, fiddling with the zipper of his pants. She slid them down, along with his boxers, and grinned up at Byakuya, who rose again, insistent on being the dominant one.
The way you used greedily made me giggle. xD -
Well I couldn't have poor Byakuya doing all the work, could I? ;3
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yeah that's actually kind of yeah
hot
alyssa would do that
she's....sensual
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