Can I get a critique on my fanfic story from the other night

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Thread Topic: Can I get a critique on my fanfic story from the other night

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  barberbob2 Senior

  11 years ago
  
  
  I would really appreciate a critique. Something that has a suggestion or two for how I can improve my writing, or maybe ideas for things you'd like to see in the future.
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  barberbob2 Senior

  11 years ago

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