I remember this story idea..
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Thread Topic: I remember this story idea..
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"What if Wonderland wasn't the kind, soft place you've read in storybooks? What if the two twins were murders? The hatter a bloody mess of demon? Perhaps a queen who wants more than just a head? Or the cat a punk rock freak that also kills? Sadly, in this place, you can't leave. Only through death. And what's that poor noise coming from the door.....?
"Wonderland is falling down,
Falling down,
Falling down,
Wonderland is falling down.
My dear Alyce...."
DTTD (Down To the Detail) is a concept I've been wanting to explore. Poor Alyce is dragged into Wonderland, full of bloody battle grounds. No fuzzy white rabbit with a pocket watch here- just a girl who controls voices of shouldn't-be-alive objects. No nice but a little mad hatter. A demon who only protects Alyce and will kill anyone else. Everyone's fighting for Alyce. Alyce, the girl of the heart of Wonderland. Poor Alyce."
I didn't get far into the story, but I wish I had. -
And the characters were pretty cool too.
The two twins that were once known as Tweedle Dee and Tweedle Dum are called Violet and Voice. When the two twins are together, their "killing voices" open, thus giving them the granted name of "Murder Twins". Violet is an actual demon while Voice is a human with powers much like a superhero's. (Violet is a female, Voice is a male)
The hatter that had once been known on most occasions as Hatter or The Mad Hatter is called Little Mad. Little dislikes wearing hats, however- the so called hats that he makes are really weapons to use against other pawns of the blood lusting teams. Little Mad is half human with red demonic eyes and a demon side that he uses in battle. His purpose? To protect his precious Alyce from the opposing teams.
The cat that had once been known as Cheshire or The Cheshire Cat is called Chesshire. Chess loves rubbing blood along his fur- so much that he cut his cheeks wider so he could smile forever at all who'd dare to sneak a peak. Chesshire uses his spiked up fur and claws for slaying his victims that are usually children.
The rabbit that had once been known as the White Rabbit is called Resound. Resound dislikes the war that's going on and talks to the doors with "mouths" that simply cannot speak to anyone else. She made a contract with the doors, just so she could go to and fro from anywhere she'd wish to any other place. Resound hides within secret rooms the doors create for her so she can stay away from the blood bath. Her best friend is Little Mad.
The hare that had once been known as the March Hare is called Revoice. Revoice was created by the Murder Twin Voice to stalk Resound.(Revoice is technically Resound's evil sister in the storyline, they look quite similar.) She ties people to chairs and happily hurts them until they vanish one way or another. She longs to be able to control the doors just like Resound, but doesn't have the same ability, causing her to hate her so-called-sister.
And then my sucky little bad girls.
The red and white queen that were once known as Red or the Red Queen and White or the White Queen, are called Blood and Rose. The two sisters are in love with each other, and they plan to get married once they win the war. They're always ordering their guards to cut people up people for amusement. Blood can control people's minds to an extent, and Rose can seduce any man within the blink of an eye to her beck and call (if they're weak and fearful). The two started the blood bath and seek to end it with them as the victors. -
Hm...it's interesting. You should try and work with it. Meanwhile I'm still working on the story I sent Andi for the contest. I know how it begins and I know how the first book ends.
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Well, I did. But I don't how how it'd go through with it. It's overdone- the idea with Alyce and all of that. It's merely adding gore to it.
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Then chose a different name and a different look. I mean my character is named May and she's not like the normal Alice's in history.
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She does have a different look. :I
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Well...*thinks* okay never mind I have nothing then.
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