Have a song I made up in ten seconds.
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Thread Topic: Have a song I made up in ten seconds.
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"I, Myself"
I have red hair
I am so fair
I have bright eyes
I reach for the sky
I am so tall
I sometimes stall
I have ivory skin
I am beautiful within
I am kind and confident
I am filled with glee
I am happy with others
I want you to join me
I don't want you to be sad
I don't see a reason for it
I know we all have feelings
I also think moping isn't rad
I know I have a roof over my head
I also know I have a bed
I know I have family and friends
I know they will love me till the end
I think you're a good person
I think you shouldn't harm yourself
I know it you will go to heaven
I know you will if you stay in the good realm
I think everyone needs love
I know everyone needs to be nicer in a way
I know everyone is a descendant from the land above
I think in the world you should stay
I need everyone to be confident
I know I can't change the world
I know you'll be happier though
I know you will if you join this song
I am proud of myself
I, Myself -
Not the best song, but I tried.
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That song.. is just all over the place.
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It's the point. I didn't ask you to like it.
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She can't take criticism.
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Want help with writing songs like that?
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I will take criticism, as long as you're nice about it. I like the song. It was quick, but I think it comes together. You don't have to fall in love with it. I can't make you do that.
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Of course. But cut down on any insults and stuff like that. Constructive but polite criticism.
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As Dark wonders up to the red head, Brownie starts talking to Anime with seriousness in her voice.
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After Brownies was done talking to Anime, Dark was suggesting to Brownies if she could help her write more songs.
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As Anime starts narrating the situation, Br0wnies watches skeptically.
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..Yeah you're being weird but okaaaaaaaaay.
Usually, songs are a lot longer, but it's agreat start. I liked what you were doing with the "I am kind and confident
I am filled with glee
I am happy with others
I want you to join me
I don't want you to be sad
I don't see a reason for it
I know we all have feelings
I also think moping isn't rad" -
*a great lol
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Thanks.
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Dark called the narrator of this story weird, but she continued on with her mentoring skills towards Brownies to help her make better songs.
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