Moko: you look bored.
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Thread Topic: Moko: you look bored.
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Moko: oh well.
Hn.
Moko: rude. -
Anri! Bad. Moko, your father says the same to you.
*steps out of the shadows* -
Moko: Hi. And I'm not rude.
Hn.*sticks her tongue out* -
Yo
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Hey star.
Moko: she's bored -
I can see that Moko
Did you see what the one guy posted as a review?! -
No....?
Moko: indeed. -
*TACKLES ANRI TO THE FLOOR*
*HOLDS HER DOWN* -
*kicks pure* off damn it!!!
Moko: *laughs* -
And I quote
Arch-Magos Winter
ARandomPerson has no taste.
Just putting that out there.
Also, USE SPELL CHECK. PLEASE. FOR THE LOVE OF GOD, USE SPELL CHECK. AND LEARN PACING.
For that matter, I might start going down the "Naruto Mary Sue Checklist" (Copyright 2013, Forgeworld Of Mars Factories Inc.) because from just skimming this I'm getting some baaad baaad vibes. -
Thats stupid. You don't have alot of spelling errors, your person isnt a mary sue, and pacing is a bit of a bore to learn.
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*rubs arm*
Bad attitude, Miss Hyuga. -
Oh hush up Pure!! *kicks him again*
Moko: *shakes her head* you two are weird. -
*yelps, throwing a couple of daggers at her*
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I'm gonna give him a 'Special' shoutout in the next chapter >:3
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