Soap Idea
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Thread Topic: Soap Idea
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Plot: A girl has been living on an Island with its natives all her life, she never questioned why she looked different from the natives, she never questioned why she was there or no one said who her parents were. A sailer crashes onto the island and is stuck there until others can help him, he has no idea where he is but the thing that irritates him most is that he now has this girl trailing after him and hanging around, no its not that she annoys him. He likes her, he really does like her, but what annoys him is that he can't like her, he can't! She's a mortal and he's a fallen angel, love like that is strictly forrbidden. But he can't help feeling drawn to her, and she can't help feeling the same. But what happens when they find her past? Can it tear them apart?
I want to be the girl :3 -
Ill do it!
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Awesome! Charries?
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Wanna bump ours?
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Name: Edward
Age: unknown looks 17
Type:fallen angel
Looks: Long shoulder lengh hair, forest green eyes, tan skin wears white mostly.
other:has a passion for drawing.
pesonality: youll see.
not it. -
Sure
Name:Laila
Age: 16
Looks: Dark wavy hair that reaches past waiste, icy blue eyes
Personality: Curious, energetic
Other: Has a love of high places -
I strolled along the shore, waves kissing the sand and barefeet skipping along the line between shore and sand. But that's when I see it, a rowing boat, I remember when the people came in a big thing like that, they had smaller things and they said they were called rowing boats. A forgiener? Excitedly a rush towards the little boat.
(Clothes: Dress made from white cloth that English sailers that taught her English) -
(cool.Sorry I have to do my point of vei in third person force of habit)
Edward rowed silently towards an unknown shore. stupid boat it had to sink. he kept rowing unto his boat hit the shore. he jumped out of his baot and looked around carefully. He saw someone coming towards the boat. -
(Its fine)
As I saw him reach shore, I quickly hid behind a nearby rock, it was an obvious hiding place but I couldn't tell if the forgiener would be bad, Chief Malo says that long ago, bad sailers tried to take the land away from us. I just needed to observe and see if he was safe, I peeked my head and looked, watching him from my hiding place -
He looked around. "huh the person disappeared." he looked around again. he knew someone couldnt disappear like that. He stated walking towards a rock and he sat down on the sand.
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The stranger sat right infront of my rock, I stood on my toes and craned my neck to look over the rock at him, I raised my toes higher so I could have a better look at him, he seemed pretty harmless.
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Edward looked up and saw a girl trying to look at him. He blinked."Um...Hello?" He said to her hoping she spoke english.
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I squealed in suprise and ducked, I was not expecting him to see me. Slowly I crawled out from my hiding place and poked him with a stick I found on the ground, "Hello", I said and poked again
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Edward heard her say hello. He grabbed ahold of the stick she was poking him with."thats very impolite to do." He smiled at her.
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"But I need to check if your safe, if your bad then I have to kill you", I said plainly but with an innocent smile. I poked him again, this time with my hand, "So, are you a danger?"
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