I NEEDZ TO SOAP.
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Thread Topic: I NEEDZ TO SOAP.
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(yeah :P )
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Jill and a few of her friends sat in the field next to the basketball court, shaded by the oak trees above them. (it's summer btw)
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(mkay) I tied my shoes and got up from the bench, bouncing the ball a couple of times.
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Sara's eyes went to a cute boy and some of his friends on the court. She nudged jill. "Hey guys, he's cute, right?" Jill laughed, and looked up at him.
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I glanced over at a couple of girls, staring at me and turned back around.
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(You're using 3rd person and I'm using 1st. Is that okay?)
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(Eh...i'd rather you use 3rd person but if you really don't want to that's fine.)
The girls were a good 30 yards away. Louise leaned over and whispered something. "he looked at us!" Jill rolled her eyes. -
Alistair shot a basket, the sun buring on his skin. He quickly ran over to get the ball and took off his shirt.
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Sara grinned, and tapped jill arms. "Jill, look, look!" Jill looked at the boy for a sec then turned away. "Ugh,.....you guys are torturing me....staaaahp."
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I tossed my shirt over on the bench and continued to shoot more baskets.
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"You guys hungry?" Jill asked, trying to change the subject.
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(darn.. Sorry. I'm so use to 1st person...) Alistair, ran off to the side to get a better aim.
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(it's fine.)
Louise rolled her eyes. "Nah, i'm fine." Sara nodded, agreeing with louise. -
He quickly ran back up, doing a layup. He caught the ball once again and shot it but this time it bouce back hard on the edge, heading toward the girls.
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Jill sueaked and caught the ball, throwing it back to the guy. "Hey, what are you trying to do? kill us?!" She yelled.
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