Oh God I just found the worst writing I could have ever
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Thread Topic: Oh God I just found the worst writing I could have ever
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It was two years ago LOL. I mean the idea wasn't too terrible, it was just my writing.. xD
It was basically about this one boy whose mother dies at birth, and his father is driven into insanity after her death so he disappears from pretty much the face of the earth. So the father had this really close friend and that guy takes care of the boy.
So while the boy is little everything is all cute and adorable and loving and s---. But once the boy grows into a teenager he starts saying all these mean things to the guy like "you're not even my real dad" and "you treat me like a little kid all the time" and all that stuff. So then he runs away to go to some college in another country. The guy never finds out where he ran off to.
So he's like the top student and all, then after a few years he finally graduates. At the graduation he was looking through the large crowd of people for the guy who took care of him (who he calls 'papa') and can't find him. He breaks down and after the ceremony he goes back to the country where he was raised with 'papa'.
When he gets there, some guy tells him that his papa died. A woman then tells him that he died because of the loneliness, and that he was always crying and asking where his son was.
Oh God it was so depressing half of the class was like "WHAT" by the end of it. I like it but I really find the need to rewrite it. -
This seems like a very nice story.
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;~; Sounds sad....
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*Cries* Thats... Sad but... a good story... I guess..
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I know right it sounds so sad... :(
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Oh, wow, that seems very depressing..
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It was depressing lol, but it got put up on the teacher board. xP
I think I will rewrite it. -
houndoom Newbieits not very depressing. but a bit sad i guess. awsome plot though.
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Yayzels. :O
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Carla123 NewbieThat's sad. Is there another one...? Or does it end with the tears?
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