Will you take the time?
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Thread Topic: Will you take the time?
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A bright pure light flashed revaling a child of the age of 8, sitting in the first throne. She had small pure white wings, slightly fuzzy ginger hair, laughing green eyes, freckles, and a child's dress of white. Her eyes were child and full of love yet wisdome and power. Another flash showed a girl the girl of the age 16, she had burnete hair tied in a braid down one shoulder and light brown eyes. She wore a dress of white and flowing yet trimmed with gold. She looked very bored. Another flash but it was half white half gold and showed a woman of the age 20 with jet black hair and dark brown eyes, she looked like a warrior. She wore a dress almost toga like of half gold and half white as it swirled in the dress. The last flash, a pure gold reviald a woman of 26 in a pure gold dress, light blonde hair flowing down her back and around her shoulders with light blue cold eyes.
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XD sweet
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The boy spoke his voice smooth yet husky "Rosila." He said looking at the child with grey eyes (he has grey not green xD)
The child looked at him "Rowan Kalver." (his name is aslo rowan I always get it mixed up xD) the boy flinched at his last night as if it caused him alot of pain. -
"Your here before the council." The girl said then turned to the girl next to her "Cala?" She asked then the burnete said "To decied your fate of tour punishment. Your crime, you let a hellhound pack escape and kill one of your own kind." The boy winced as if he had been slapped but he stayed quiet then Rosila and Cala looked at the black haired girl "Raven?" They both said in usion "You face fallen or worse." Raven said glaring down at him "Celia?" All three girls looked at the queen "I have deiced for your punishment you will become a...fallen." All eyes turned back on Rowan and soon all girls agreed and Rowan closed his eyes as the floor dissapeard from below him and the rooes dissaperd sending him tumbling to the earth his wings snapping upwards as he yelled in agony then he hit the earth. His wings changed.. They turned pure black yet the gold remained. Some where a girl loomed up and felt a tugging in her heart....
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Woa. You wrote this?
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Yes, I did this is only the Prolog
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Dude. Your writing is amazing! You should beh discovered.
I think mine is downright terrible. :P -
Aww! Thanks guys! I also love to draw :) I just space out and it comes to me. You guys are a great audience thanks for reading!
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Wow Goddess this is great!!! Remember me when you are worldwide famous!
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Aww guys! You guys are too sweet! Ill have to put more on here once I get chapter one finnished :) I will always remember you guys :) promise!
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Your welcome. :) same with meh. I always get my ideas when I'm in class. :P and then I just frantically pull out paper and write furiously. :) I get in trouble sometimes, but I don't care. :p
You should do a quiz series, people would love your story. -
I will :) this is just the start my friends! Haha I once wrote a wolf book that my friend went crazy for
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Anyone would be crazy about your writing!!!
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I love you guys! I should give you guys a shout out in my book if I ever get it published!
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