Fragile and Broken Hearted One
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Thread Topic: Fragile and Broken Hearted One
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This is a poem I made when feelings and emotions where pouring out of me... so its pretty pure and all. Its more or less based off my feelings inside.. but I brought it up in a different.. state of mind I guess you can say.
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If love isn't the answer to my problems
Then what will tell me whats right and wrong?
Is there something more to me then this?
I don't want to sit in your shadows
And I don't want to be your little play toy
I want to express myself in the world of truth
Not in the world of denial and void
You barely hear my words to speak
You never gave me the time of day
I could never show myself complete
I was always ruined by your tormenting words
Silent in the presents of your ignorance
Tired of fighting for what I truly needed
Doomed in the spirit of hurt and pity
Breathless at the sight of my own blood
I knew being with you was pain
I knew my end was bound to come anytime soon
I never gave you the right satisfaction, I know
I thought our love was written in the stars
When the only thing I see now, is broken hearts
Every time my eyes close, I see a place better than this
Hoping to be taken far far away
But my hopes and dreams are smashed
For you stopped and blocked me in my paths
My tears stained my cheeks every night
Bruises become my only friend
For they stay with me more than anyone
I saved my breathe because you would not care
That statement you made very clear
You said you were going to be there
Where are you now when my heart is broken into pieces?
I can no longer share love with you any longer
I must break your tight hold
I must become stronger -
D,: so sad...
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Too depressing. :(
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Well, thanks?
This was about my recent break-up..actually.. :/ -
Aw, sorry to hear that!
It was a really great poem though.
I hope things turn out better for you soon. :D -
-that is what i thought I was going to get e.e
lol guess not.. -
BetterPoet NewbieUmm, okay then! >:P
Aw, sorry to hear that!
It was a really great poem though.
I hope things turn out better for you soon. :D
Lol, but no seriously it was a great poem! -
hey thanks! :D
lol
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