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Thread Topic: Story contests
Okay. Sorry. Just had lunch.
Wait...why does it say I am a newbie?
Oh, now it does not. Good.
Oh and this is my story:
The life of Mistpaw(Me as a warrior cat)
Luna had a perfect life until she was captured by river clan but freed by Thunder clan because Blustar thought it was her dead sister who came back to life but if was not.So that night Luna was startled awake because she got a message from Starclan and it sed that she and Firestar are special.So Luna couldn't sleep so she started wondering around and she was chased by a wolf.She got stuck in a hunting trap that save her life.The people found her and took her to a vet.There the wet checked her out and injected a sparkly invisible substance so she fainted.When she waved up she was in a cage and then she realised her eyes are now purple which scared her sooo much bu because of the fire her fur flamed up and lightnings ware zapping around her unit; they did not brake the cage.Then Luna realised that injection gave her some sort of powers.So when Luna was free she ran back to her new clan right on time for battle.She was fighting Darkstripe!So they started fighting and once Darkstripe wanted to finish her so Luna was ready to fight back when all of a sudden Darkstripe went right trough Luna and then Luna became invisible and slowly stared ro look like a gosht and mist was surrounding her and then she was back to normal but had one paw that was surrounded by mist and of course Luna knockout Darkstripe.So luna was given the name Mistpaw.A few days later after trining whit Whitestorm it was time for her first battle.The Thunder clan won the battle and the apprentices all got rewarded by a day off.And so months passed until Mistpaw ran into her kittypet crush and that was Titanium.He offers her to come with him but she offered him to come whit her. So there was a fight between them and they all want their separate ways.That was pretty devastating for Mistpaw so Firepaw came up and sed
-Don't be sad, I will be your friend.
And Firepaw kissed Ker in her cheek.So Mistpaw smiled a little bit and smiled and sed:
-You are so kind.
So Mistpaw and Firestar became best friends.So one day the apprentices ware teamed up in tens and need to defend the border but only two ware one one side and two on the other side.So the they came back and they ware successful.But Sandpaw was injured so there ware only dow to four apprentices but the apprentices got their new names Firepaw
I hope you like my story.
That is...a ton of run-on sentences
Oh and do you like my now picture?
What is that and Moonpaw thank you for reading my story
Oh this (-) Yeah used that instead of ("").
"A run-on sentence occurs when two or more independent clauses (also known as complete sentences) are connected improperly. "
Hermiony, how old are you that you don't know what a run-on sentence is?
My story is on the fourth page, if you want to read it, hermiony.
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