The Chameleon Shelves Feedback

Thread Topic: The Chameleon Shelves Feedback

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    ChameleonLeap Novice
    Yep. Title says all.
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    ChameleonLeap Novice
    Now give me feedback on my latest things 😐
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    dragonsfire Experienced
    I'll have to read them later.
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    dragonsfire Experienced
    It hurt his heart to see the United States in such a terrible condition.

    So, I'm assuming he's a British soldier before the Revolution. Britain didn't see the colonies as a country. They were still their colonies. And we didn't really start calling it the United States of America until after the Civil War. They were called British America unitl the Treaty of Paris recognized the independence of the original thirteen United States of America in 1783.
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    dragonsfire Experienced
    ^That was for Drop of Kindness.
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    dragonsfire Experienced
    The FIreflies one, besides a few typos, is really good!
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    ChameleonLeap Novice
    Yeah, I really wish I could find the one I wrote in 4th grade. But my Language Arts teacher kept everyone’s for herself ☹
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    dragonsfire Experienced
    Ok.
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    ChameleonLeap Novice
    Bomp
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    ChameleonLeap Junior
    Blump

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