A New Kind of Story
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Thread Topic: A New Kind of Story
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So this is my first forum post so don't blame me if its bad. Please help me finish my story!!! Thanks!! Let's begin!!
18 years living in this cellar. Waiting, waiting to get my revenge on Kane Jack. He was once a friend but now no more than an enemy. "Looking for someone?" said a lovely girl's voice. I looked up. Kane's sister........ -
Wait, so you want people to post what would happen next?
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Yes. Make up new characters. Make up new problems. Continue the story you know what I mean.
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She smiled and picked up a key. "Looking for this?" she asked. It was the key to my cell.
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"Perhaps I was looking for it. What's it to you?" My eyes were locked on the key. It shimmered in the light, looking just as pretty as his sister. Her hair was as bright as the cell key that was in her hands, as blonde and shiny as an angel's. Her eyes were a deep blue. Everything about her was perfect. I hated her, too, almost as much as Kane. "Hand it over, and I'll let you live," I grumbled. "Oh, sweetheart.. I appreciate the offer, but no."
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I grabed a nearby rock, aiming it to her head. "Fine." she grumbled. She tosed the key to me. I examined it. "It's a fake!" I yelled. I grabed the rock a threw. I missed by a mile. She laughed. It sounded like bells shimmering. I looked down and saw something. Next to the fake key, was a bobby pin.
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My fingers snatched up both the fake and the bobby pin. I pretended like it was only the key that I had picked up. Whether she had meant to throw a bobby pin or not, I was grateful. I continued to glare at her, by fingers twirling the bobby pin. "Hmph.. Why don't you just leave?"
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She didn't move. "Just use the bobby pin. I gave it to you for a reason."
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"..A reason? What's your reason? What's--" I tried to ask her, but the beautiful blonde was already gone. I stared in shock at the bobby pin in my hands.
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I opened the cell and steped outside.
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"Finally." she said. "I thought you died in there."
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