I NEED HELP PLEASE
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Thread Topic: I NEED HELP PLEASE
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iM Making A Story About A Girl Who Keeps Having Flashbacks Of Her Father Dieing iN An Explosion And She's Scared She'll Die The Same Way . And Everyday She Cries Because She Misses Him . Her Friends Always Tall Her To Let Go Of Him And Be A Party Animal Like Them , But She Can't Take The Chances . She's All Her Mom Has Left , So To Die Would Be A Huge Tragedy . Her Best Friend ( A Boy , i Dunno Name Yet ) Helps Her Get Through The Hard Times And Let Loose . iN The End Her Mom Dies While Giving Birth To Her Second Child . Her Best Friend Dies Too ( i Dont Know Why Yet ) And She Eventually Kills Herself To Be With Them .
i Think This iS A Good Story . But There iS Only One Problem , i Dunno A Good Title . So Please Help ! Comment A Good Title i Should Use ... PLEASEEE ! -
Hm... Is there an object of significance that the girl remembers him by? Or how about something to do with memories or detonation?
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i Will Also Add An Afterlife Version Or Something . Her And Her Best Friend Might Get Married And Have Kids iN Heaven . i Dunno . i Also Take ideas ! (:
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Hayy Tayy NewbieTogether Forever
How about that? -
How about 'So Long'? It has two very prominent meanings. One, that she hasn't seen her father in so long, and two, it implies that she will be saying goodbye.
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Alana , i Dont Understand A Word You Just Said , Llab .
Hayy , i Dunno . Sounds Kinda Tacky .. -
Hayy Tayy NewbieAlana, that's a great name!
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Never mind. How about 'Everlasting'?
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Late post.
Thanks. :3 -
OH MY GOD YES !
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Hayy Tayy NewbieOr
I'll always be there. -
IM IN LOVE WITH THE TITLE 'EVERLASTING' NOW , LOL .
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Hayy Tayy NewbieThat's perect Alana!
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:D Glad I could be of assistance.
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Hayy Tayy Newbie*Perfect
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