Dragon's Lair
- Locked due to inactivity on Mar 2, '21 3:54am
Thread Topic: Dragon's Lair
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Yeah, well Nix's description kind of reminded me of a kid even though he's 18 years old
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that felt longer then too sentences :c
dang it
actually the kids house seems about right -
It's better...
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Im gonna fix it second post will be better
I really need to work on my first posts in roleplays! Any suggestions? -
Grammar, of course. First you need to do your contractions, though. Like, you need to remember to put the ‘ in “don’t”. Just a suggestion though, don’t take it personally. Also try to personify things—like instead of “The room was messy,” maybe do something like “The T-shirts were scattered across the floor, and week-old pizza lay on the nightstand.” Again, just a friendly suggestion.
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I've been giving her tips. Mostly about grammar, descriptiveness, and putting people's train of thought, emotions, memories, etc. in there.
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Whoa whoa calm down
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That's really not how it is.
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Oh my goodness she won't let me explain
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explain XD
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Wait what?
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Explain OwO
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explain why my paper airplane crumbled D’:
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m a r m a l a d e
mood. -
Halp me dig grave for Mr. Airplane
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