Critique?
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Thread Topic: Critique?
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So I'm designing a character.
She's a Rusian circus performer.
Her mother was Russian her father Spanish. She has strange abilites.
She can adapt her body ( and the white rose she always carries ) to survive any situation.
As well as having a sirenic voice , enhanced senses ( something simalir to spider sense ) , elemental control depending strictly on location and atmosphere .
She is also able to harden the Rose and in one ( and future occourances ) uses her Rose like a sword.
These pictures are her representative photos please tell me which works best effect wise.
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She is rather traumatised and in the future may suffer from PTSD.
She is only twelve at the start but is an accomplished gymnast ( not on the level of a grown black widow as of that time period but she will be around that of A twelve year old professional gymnast )
She wears three different masks in her time period.
Her voice has an echoing effect therefore her act is called echoing rose in English -
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I forgot to post this but please if you're going to post please Crituqe the pictures not the charcater.
Also mention which is your favourite and why thanks guys. -
1 is supposed to be no floor colour and only a few bits on the mask , the Rose and the red petals.
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Please explain your reasoning GirlyG.
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Because you can make out what it looks like. Also it's prettier. To me that is.
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In every picture it's clear its a mask a rose and rose petals. The petals symbolise her spilt blood while the white rose symbolises her rebirth as Anya ( might chnage it ) Rose .
You didn't know this so its fine.
However it being prettier doenst really go with the limited information I could provided
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