the new sun has risen.

Thread Topic: the new sun has risen.

cody17 Newbie

11 years ago

Its feels better outside today.( some would say)
I like it best not too hot but not too cold outside.
Jinx Blackclaw Novice

11 years ago

Just right. XD
cody17 Newbie

11 years ago

I'm an open book.
Any questions?
I'll take.
Any opinions?
I'll take.
Also comments...
Jinx Blackclaw Novice

11 years ago

I don't have any questions
cody17 Newbie

11 years ago

Straight off your head .
Do you think you could easily write a 3-5 lined poem?
Jinx Blackclaw Novice

11 years ago

Yeah
cody17 Newbie

11 years ago

Try it
See if it turns out any good.
Your mind is a weapon.
Use it in life.
It is your best weapon to use.
Jinx Blackclaw Novice

11 years ago

Ok
cody17 Newbie

11 years ago

Let your mind guide your hands.
Your hands be your emotions.
And your eyes your guide.
Jinx Blackclaw Novice

11 years ago

Let life be your guide,
As the pain subsides
As you confide,
In the place where you start.
cody17 Newbie

11 years ago

Good. Bravo.
Shadows guide your soul
You cling to your life
Clocks strike 12
Evil lives to tell.
Jinx Blackclaw Novice

11 years ago

that is great!
cody17 Newbie

11 years ago

Remember .
Not all poetry needs to rhyme.
Jinx Blackclaw Novice

11 years ago

Ok but it's hard for me to write poetry that doesnt rhyme.
cody17 Newbie

11 years ago

If that's what best for you stick to it.
I like it without rhyming much .

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