Chase
- Locked due to inactivity on Aug 4, '16 4:32pm
Thread Topic: Chase
-
It was over.
Blood spreading on the floor, my boots died crimson. Sitting there, I killed someone. Out of vengeance. My hands became clammy and my sweat trickled down my forehead.
"What am I going to do?" I trembled, sucking in my courage. The rain felt like tiny knives picking my spine one by one. My heart raced as I threw the dagger at a tree and screamed.
Sounds of police echoed within the woods, sending me dashing. My brain had a hard time processing what I had just done. Will I be forgiven? Will this end? What is going to happen to me?
My black robe waved in the occurring wind I pushed against. The cold droplets of pain still stung my face. Trees surrounded me like they were trying to cave me in. My eyes couldn't handle it anymore, so I let my tears struggle down my cheeks. I let them stream over my crimson body and wash away some of my worries. They collected the corpse's remains on my clothing.
Why? I thought. Why is this happening? As difficult as it was, I knew exactly why my fears are coming to life. I murdered a suspect. I slaughtered someone who had once tried to kill me. Does that mean I'm innocent? Or am I still a victim? The questions wouldn't stop swirling my brain.
Nothing could change what just happened. Even if I tried to escape, it couldn't.
Nothing. -
*applause*
I write,but I don't know if I could write like that.Would you mind if I posted one of my chapters? -
Sure ^-^ I love to read
-
Ok.Here it is.Please give me opinions.These are three chapters.I wrote it all.
What?
"Hannah,where are you?"thinking in your head.The vibration of your phone alarmed you as you picked it up.
"It's from Hannah!"
Reading the text message,it said,"Sorry.I can't make it.My mom is making me clean my room.She won't let me go out today."You were crushed putting down your phone in self pitty.
"What about my best friend,Zack?He is probably at home,bored.I'll call him."(Insert random number here.)
"Hey,Zack!Would you like to hang out at my place!I've got StarBucks."He hung up and raced towards years your house because you know he can't resist the delicious taste of StarBucks coffee.
Oh No.
Zack hopped into his car.He couldn't wait to have the taste of creamy StarBucks coffee in his mouth.As he was driving,he was also texting you.
"I'm on my way."He knew his mother had always told him to never text and drive,and he was about to pay the price.He wasn't keeping his eyes on the road and slammed into another car.Zack silently screamed in horror as his legs were crushed by the other car.Almost falling,he managed to open the door and fell on the road.He layed there quietly crying.Another driver had seen the accident.That driver was Niall.He reported it to his local news station.Back at the house,you got bored and decided to watch a litle television.The news was on,and that's when you saw the accident.
"We still have very little evidence on this case."said the news reporter.You were just thinking it was another accident until Zack's car was shown on the screen.
"Oh No!That's Zack's car!"You cried.
Save You Tonight
The thought of your best friend in a car accident terrifies you.What is there to do?You can't just race down there and expect everything to be alright because it wasn't alright.Your friend is lying on the road in pain,and there is nothing you can do about it.Your ashamed of yourself.You know that this is kind of your fault because you decided to text him.
"This would of never happened if I hadn't decided to text him.It's all my fault.I have to do something."you sobbed.Pulling out your phone,you called for an ambulance to the location of the accident.
"Hello?I need an ambulance to highway 1-95 in Savannah,Georgia.Thank you very much.Bye.You grabbed your bag and sped all the way to the accident.You looked at the scene in horror and shame.
"He is going to be alright.He is going to be alight.He is going to be alright."assuring yourself.Watching the ambulance arrive brang relief.He was still breathing and had a steady heart beat.Wiping your tears,you knew he would be fine.
TO BE CONTINUED! -
YOYO I AMD writing a book in the lounge could u guys give me some feed back
-
Library
-
I LOVE IT!That's your feedback from me. :)
This thread is locked, therefore no new posts can be made.
