Chapter 2 The.Love You Soon Knew About
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XXAlexXX NewbieYou should think about poblishing.
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You took the detention slips from the teacher, your heart dropping to the bottom of your stomach. Your heart beat fast as you turned around, focusing on the ground to try and ignore the judging eyes which surrounded you. Quickly, you and Niall returned to your seats. Upon glancing at him, you could tell he was also ashamed. You but your lip and focused on your desk. He was really quite handsome. A bit forward, yes, but who wouldn't want him to hit on them?! You were glad he had said that and not some creep.
Suddenly, Niall leaned over and spoke. "I'm sorry, this whole thing is my fault. What can I do to make it better?"
Your heart suddenly beat faster. You noticed the whole room was abuzz with chatter as the teacher prepared a slideshow. "I don't know. I've never been to detention before; I'm a goody-goody! I'm not sure I'll even know what to do..."
Niall opened his mouth but was interrupted by the clearing of Ms. Beck's throat as she stood before the class and begun her lecture. It was boring. You looked at your book and studied the pretty pictures of the Aztecs, which seemed much more interesting than Ms. Beck droning on about their history. With the eraser of your purple mechanical pencil, you drew a heart on you desk. Was it okay to get sidetracked like this? You didnt have time to wonder as you began to doodle more. Eventually, there were only two minutes left. Everyone began packing up.
When the bell finally rang, it felt like a weight had been lifted. You lifted up your bag to go as Niall approached you.
"Do you want to come to my house after detention?" he asked.
You blushed. Go to a boy's house? Surley your parents wouldn't allow it. Of course, you could say you were going to a friend's house. "Sure."
Niall flashed a grin. "Come on, I'll walk you to detention."
You blush more and return the smile, getting out your phone to text your parents.
Entering detention, you notice immediately the glum aura of the room. The smell of pencil shavings and gum filled the room as you looked around, everyone on their phones and passing notes. You roll your eyes, remembering not to repeat that mistake. You took a seat next to Niall and waited for it to be over.
After two and a half hours of silent torture, you were released and you and Niall left quietly, exiting to the parking lot. -
My stories are published on Quotev.I published them.
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XXAlexXX NewbieI mean into a true book. You have a gift. Just like I do.
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Rain.Wow.You made my chapter of Detention look bad because of the way you changed it.
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Ouch.
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Thank you Alex.
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XXAlexXX Newbie... Uh-oh ...
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Wow.I'm in awe over your writing skills.
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Is that saracasm...?
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No.
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Oh. It's probably bad tho bc I'm not even a directioner and I don't even write often. XD
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It's amazing in my opinion.I have to go to bed.It's almost 11 and I have to wake up early tomorrow.Good night.
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XXAlexXX NewbieI can't write. That was always my best subject but then a girl took my writing and used bigger, better words. Now I just hate to write. Period. But i can draw a little. But, I stick to gymnastics because its important to me. I can write a story. But I want your true thoughts. Not just a lie. I hate people who lie. It makes me feel like I'm nit safe around them and I have no-one to trust. Wow. I can turn This into a drama story. Just one story response can make you feel so confident. Keep writing. And i know that you'll be happy because your so good. Anyway, do you have any options for my story?
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I took photo of my cat with love heart next to it like it??
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