This is the first chapter of my small ghost story.
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Three days later.
Jake was at the local hospital, he survived the fall but broke several of his bones. He had to be supervised by at least 5 people to calm him down at night, he had nightmares about the child. Each night he would start shaking uncontrollably and screaming, screaming for the child that wasnt there to get off him, to leave him alone, to not hurt him. His nightmares continued night after night, he swore the he could sometimes see the child hiding in the dark corridors of the hospital, or in the shadows in the corner of his room. He did not know who the child was, didnt know its gender, age, power or the childs true purpose. He knew only one thing, he was dead. The child would come for him sooner or later to murder him, without any sympathy or mercy. To his surprise the child stopped appearing, Jake was frightened at first but then became more relaxed, way too relaxed. One silent night Jake had a good dream, a nice dream about him surrounded by kittens, many kittens. Then all of a sudden they started eating each other, ripping the flesh of each other. Jake was already hiding, his dream turned into a nightmare and he woke up, he did not scream. He didnt want to alert the others. He got out of bed and walked towards the door, the door would not move an inch. He heard that same giggling again, that same giggling and he knew that it was the child. He turned around quickly with his eyes closed, he felt something touch him which sent shivers down his spine. His eyes opened, once again he could not control his body. The child appeared in front of him, it was holding around 10 needles and then the child spoke Hi Jake, I havent seen you for a while The child then stabbed one needle into Jakes arm, then leg, then many more times into both his arms. The child was giggling, licking the blood of Jakes blood. Then it picks up a syringe and jabs it into Jakes stomach. Jake feels his body getting heavier, much heavier. He feels himself regain consciousness and he falls, falls to the ground bleeding. He did not have enough energy to shout, he could only whisper. That was of no help to him, so he just lied there, slowly bleeding to his death. Then he sees the child laughing, but his hearing is very poor from the loss of blood, so the laughter is faint. The child then takes something from Jakes bed and disappears into the shadows.
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