have you guys seen my thread in Literature?
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Thread Topic: have you guys seen my thread in Literature?
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i really need an opinion on my story
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You want a completely honest opinion, or do you want everyone to gush about how awesome it is?
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honest i can take a hit
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It's rather poorly written and I believe it could use more detail. Dialogue from different people should be separated on different lines.
"Hello."
"Hey."
"Lovely weather, huh?"
"My mother just died you dick."
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ok but its just a rough draft so i dont forget what i wanna put later
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You asked for an opinion on what is there. There you go. Bye.
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