Soap?
- Locked due to inactivity on Aug 4, '16 4:24pm
Thread Topic: Soap?
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Plot: in a world where its all divided, where you are catigorised by your strongest personality trait and where it all seems to be chaos. Honest. Fearless. Intelligence.
Yet all have the bad traits, the do not understand privacy, the couragous can be brutal fighters and daring to the point of stupidy, and the intelligent have grown greedy for the want of more intelligence.
At the age of 16, you must make the choice to leave your home place to the place of your trait, or stay.
Tris (my charrie), after taking the test was allocated with three results, Honest, Fearless and Intelligence, only a few like her exist and are wanted dead by the government, why? The reason for the division is greater control, those like her are not easy to control and are immediatly killed, Tris was lucky that the test runner was another Stranger just like her.
She chooses to leave home and joins the Courage community but must first undergo training and remian a secret. There, she meets a trainer, the youngest trainer in History at the age of 17, he is also a Stranger and must keep his secret too, the two soon fall in love but deny the truth of their Stranger, to keep his identy and their love a secret he's harder on her than the others because he knows of her pontetial even though at first she had a weak build and no experience at fighting. But when the communities higher powers grow suspious on the two? And soon the government are out to kill them? Will they fight back? -
wait. I CALL IT FOR A SECOND WHILE I READ.
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nah. nvm
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Do you have a better plot we could maybe use?
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ehm.......Ok, lemme try this one with a third person. hold on im gonna make a thread.
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