Deserted Island Soap Opera
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Thread Topic: Deserted Island Soap Opera
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He heard screams and paddled with all his strength, and now he was close enough to see the people.
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I went under. I caught a glimpse of my brother and father before everything went dark.
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Name:Somay(Sue-may)
Gender:Girl
Age:14
Character:Slave
Hair:Black and in a ponytail
Eyes:Coffee brown
Skin:Medium tan
Height:Medium
Weight:Skinny
Sibilings:Big brother,age 16,Sukaby(Sue-ca-bye)
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Zuma heard screams, she told her pack-sister and they raced off.
Imik gaurded the stuff..
Renu looked at the girl drownding.
"Soul eater.."She said, as she watched, unable to help. -
Somay worked all day. She chopped wood,dug holes,and cooked food. She hated the idea of being a slave,but she didn't want to get killed,neither did her brother,Sukaby.
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There was a young lady who had very big clothes, a man with a costume the colour of mud, and a little boy with white as snow skin. The lady was sinking, so I took he hand and raised her on my canoe. The father started yelling something about it being his daughter.
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Then the father realized that I wanted to help, and climbed onto my canoe also.
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I woke up, spurting out water. I was soaked, as was my father and brother.
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Renu yelled at them, asking if she could help, but Zuma was already swimming.
She followed, reaching the canoe and smiling.
Imik cawed.. -
By the time the lady woke up, I was ashore.
(My first chracter speaking now)
I saw the young lady, she was half waking up by now. Her companions were wet. I helped her cough up the water in her lungs. -
Somay and Sukaby sweat all day.
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I was shivering, as was my brother. I grabbed him and hugged him hard. My father was trying to comunicate to our rescuers.
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I didnt now if she could speak for she was very foreign looking.
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Renu looked at the girl and said "What happened?"
Her accent was there, but they should understand.
Zuma shook her pelt. -
My father tried speaking to the older looking man, and found out that they also speak english.
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