i took a shower and came back. :D
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Thread Topic: i took a shower and came back. :D
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oh, okiez~
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*Piano playing softly*
Words of hate, going through my head,
Haunting me,
The nightmares that follow me,
When I dream.
Have you no shame
Of what you did?
Who's to blame?
When you won't quit,
I try so hard,
Can't you see?
Guess its hard to see,
When your killing me inside...
Free me please..
(Chorus) I don't know if I can go on,
You've been my demon for so long,
My heart is dying,
And turning black.
And there's no way I can turn back.
When will I die?
Free me from this, please...
I try to show strength,
I try to breath,
I try to go on
When I'm being shot down.
I try to smile,
But all I receive is a frown.
And you'll be left with a broken soul,
When ik gone and you have no place to go.
Had a chance to say sorry,
But you threw it out no there's no chance, sorry.
Free me please....
(Chorus x2)
And how does it feel,
Now that I'm up here?
And do you know
How you made me go...
And I hope you know...
(Chorus) -
Bravo. I am speechless.
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*I'm gone.
Not ik gone. -
x3 Thanks. There was a rap part that my brother had. Want to see it?
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sure.
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Mkay. One minute..
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*waits*
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This would go after the two choruses.
Sometimes I sit and think to myself,
Could I have given you a little help?
Could I have pulled through,
Could I have saved you?
From these emotions,
The insane commotions,
That come with love,
And breaking hearts,
But I never knew where I should start
Is destjny really uncontrollable,
Cause if not,
Helping you would have been something I never forgot...
Even after the abuse,
The pain caused you,
I would've found something I could do.
But I gues I couldn't take it anymore,
That's why I'm up here,
Everything gathered up on the floor.
You said you loved me,
But I guess you really hated me,
So saying goodbye was a priority. -
*Destiny
*Pain caused by you -
nice. It changes the feel of the song, but it's okay.
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Well, the song is about feeling like dying because of some horrid person..
And his POV was trying to help, but not taking it anymore.
I guess your right. x3 -
yeah, rap in a depressing song ruins the tone, you know?
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I concure x3 Like in Payphone, Wiz Khalifa does no justice to the song...
But his all rap songs with a singing chorus have mad feel and truth them ._. -
eh, idk. I just don't like it when rap mixes, like linkin park.
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