could i get feedback on a song im making?

Thread Topic: could i get feedback on a song im making?

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  Espie Senior

  1 months ago
  hello :D! i started making this song im still in the works of but i don’t have a lot of people to ask to listen💔💔, so i was wondering if you guys could listen and give feedback :0? nevermind the watermarks🥀
  
  
  
  it’s mainly the ending im more concerned about. i was going to add another section as an outro that’s different from the middle but is it repetitive? i was also going to add lyrics which is why it repeats in some areas aswell lol
  
  thank you:))
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  Br0wnieBunny Expert

  1 months ago
  i think my main feedback is that i think the beginning percussion sounds a bit silly/like character customization or loading music, which i don't hate at all! it's fun and vibey. but i got a little confused around 0:30 and then 0:48 since it feels like a different kind of mood. i was left wondering what you meant to convey. but i don't dislike any of the instrumentals you added - just was curious how they're all meant to fit together! also, an outro would be cool if you used the drums from that middle section
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  Espie Senior

  1 months ago
  thank you so much!!! i was experimenting with a note switch-up but you’re right it was a bit jarring mid-song and i wanted to make the transition a bit smoother when i polish it more. and you read my mind lol i was planning on another switch up not so jarring for the outro using the drums i was excited to start on
  
  thank you again i appreciate!

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