Harry Potter Fans, Help!

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    DragonzEye Novice
    cheese
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    DragonzEye Novice
    k changed my pic back good
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    gfh012 Novice
    Ok, sorry for any spelling errors, this is the story of Eve Evet, a half-blood slytherin orphan. I've tried to make it mostly work with the original story.
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    gfh012 Novice
    I got sorted into slitherin, I walk up to Draco Malfoy with his cronies Crab and Goyle on either side, I ask, "Can I sit down?" He replys, "So what if I say no?" I say, "If you're afaid to sit with a girl, fine then. Sit with your cronies if you don't think you can defend yourself against a girl." As I start to walk off, I hear Draco tell Crab to leave. He then yells at me, "Fine, you can sit!" I sit next to him. "Thank you, you're Draco right?" "So?" I roll my eyes......

    Near the end of the 3rd year, I am walking on the school grounds, and a dememtor comes at me, I have no defence and I hear my mother and father screaming... I pass out. I am half-awake and I see Draco and Harry comeing at the dememtor from different sides of the grounds. Harry runs up and cast "Expecto Patronum" but it is an extremly strong dementor Draco asks what the spell is, and Harry shouts "Expecto Patronum, and you have to think of something happy!" Draco cast "Expecto Patronum" and a fox patronus comes out if his wand. The dementor flys away. Draco asks Harry "So I'm geussing you thought of me dead." "Actually, I thought being with Eve." "Funny, so did I." "You keep away from Eve!" "She's my girlfriend!" I groan, it's all I can do. They both carry me to the infirmary. I pass out.
    I wake up after a few hours, Draco and Harry are argueing over me. They both notice I'm awake. "Eve, please tell Potter that I'm your boyfriend!" Draco says. Harry adds "You shouldn't be with a jerk like him, I'm the one who saved you!" "It wouldn't have left if I hadn't added my patronus." "You didn't even know how to cast one!" I scream "Boys! Please. I'll show you who I like, both of you close your eyes and silently count to 30." They do, I kiss Draco, Harry finishes counting, and thinks that Draco forced me to kiss him. He throws Draco off of me, Draco hits him, I stand up and Harry says "Eve, I-" but he can't finish cause I slap him, and say that I was Draco's girl and he should accept that. Harry storms out.

    We are in our fourth year, Getting ready for the dress "rehearsal" Draco comes down with his hair all slicked back, I walk up to him, and brush his bangs back onto his forhead, "I like them better that way." "Really?" he takes my hair clip out. "Your hair looks better like that." I smile.
    Snape tells all the girls to go upstairs, and when the boys saw their date, the would come and lead them down the steps and onto the dance floor. Many girls come, then it's my turn, Blaise says "Oh, wow... Draco you think a seventh year is going with her? Draco?" but he is already at the stairs, leading me down. "Wow! How'd he get her?"
    We're learning how to dance for the yule ball, we are dancing to the marzapan music from the nutcracker. We are dancing hard, and we all get very tired, so we are given a break during which most of us fall asleep, I wake up and Draco is standing in front of me, smirking. "You're attractive when you sleep," He says and he slowly walks away, I start walking after him, "What was I doing? Hey! Draco?!" he turns around smiling mischeviously. The music starts, and he lifts me up. We start dancing togther.
    It is the day of the yule ball, Draco and I walk in, the 4 "champions" start dancing, then most of the staff, Draco and I notice that Snape is not among them, nor is our new teacher Proffessor Moody. "I notice you're not wearing white Malfoy, are you still hurt by that ferret buisness?" Cedric Diggory asks as he walks up. "No, actually my date helped me pick." he gestures to me. Cedric apperently just notices me, "Oh, (putting on the "Cool 17-year-old") I suppose you didn't want to remind him of his terrible time, how conciderate" I reply, with false sweetness "Wrong again, I thought that Black suited him better, but thanks for asking" I bat my eyelashes. Draco and I walk off and dance for a while. I later dance with Harry, then Krum, then I dance with Cedric for a waltz. Then Draco and I go into a corner, he asks if I want to leave. I hear Harry and Ron talking and laughing in hushed whispers, and I tell Draco "We're being watched" "I'll go get some Drinks." is all he replies. I walk over to Harry and Ron, "What are you all laughing at?" I ask. "Nothing" they both say. "Really? It couldn't be the fact that you were watching me and Draco?" Harry abruptly says. "sit down please, Eve." I do "we just find it amusing that you would go to the ball with Malfoy of all people" "Why is that? He's tall, hansome (Ron snorts), rich, a SLYTHERIN." "and also vain, humorless, and cruel." "Vain? I don't ever see him checking his apperance. Humorless? He's funny when he wants to be. Cruel? Only to those who aren't his friends." Ron then says, "But he's a slimy git!" Draco then walks up, "Are these Gryffindors annoying you?" he asks, I glance at Hary. I reply with false innocence, "No, the were just telling me that you were... what was it Weasley?" Draco says "Yes do tell weasle" at this point, Snape walks up. "Is everything alright?" "Yes Proffessor" we all murmer. "Good, perhaps Mr Malfoy and Miss Evet should head to the common room, if they're done dancing?" he then walks off. "Come on Eve." Draco says. I reply, "I'll be there in one minute." He walks off, spilling a little of his drink purposefully onto Harry and Ron. Hermione walks up, "Hello Granger" I say. Hermione looks surprised, "You didn't call me a- the slytherin word for muggleborn." She says. "Just because I date Draco, doesn't mean I speak the same as him word for word, Ron and Potter, we're just laughing at the fact that they saw me with Draco once" Ron asks "First of all, you're sure the sorting hat put you in the right house? Secondly, are you sure Malfoy doesn't have you under a love potion?" "Hermione, do I look and act like someone who is under a love potion?" NO, but you sure don't look or act like a slytherin either. You called me and Ron by first name." Harry has now moved to the edge of the bench he is sitting on, and is close enough to me where if he moved, he would touch me. "If anyone is under a love potion, it's Harry, anyway, I'm late for meeting Draco. I say sweetly, "Goodbye Harry." and then say, "bye Ron, Hermione" and walk off, leaving Harry gaping at me, Ron looking stunned, and Hermione faintly amused.

    1 year later, I'm on my way to class, Neville passes me. "Potions is this way!" he says. I respond, "I'm doing Divination." Neville replies, "but, Malfoy is in that class!" "Really?" I ask rather unconvincingly. I walk to the bookshelf I'll need to get science books from, Neville peers around the corner. Draco is standing in front of the bookshelf, I walk up to him, and say, "Hi Draco" He looks around, Neville quickly ducks away, When Draco looks at me again, he's got his smirk, and winks at me. Neville makes a face, and he walks off...
    He tells Harry, Ron and Hermione what he saw, "I thought that he had like forced her to go with him to the ball last year." he says. Ron replies, "Yeah we kind of knew that Malfoy was with her, she got really angry at us when we were making fun of it. Maybe she's under a love potion!" "Really Ron, we've already denied that once," Hermione says, "If she were, she would just talk about Him, and never anything else." "What does she see in him, what has he got that I don't?" Harry asks. We're both rich, we're both 15 we're both-" "full of yourselves and arregant?" Ron says. "Thanks Ron, maybe she likes the bad boy type? I'll try to be rude when I see her." "I don't think that will work Harry." Hermione tells him. Neville then says, "Maybe not, but I'd much rather her be with him then Malfoy!"
    Draco and I are walking down the corridor, Harry passes, I instinctively grab onto Draco's arm, as we walk by. Harry purposly knocks a first years books all over, then doesn't bother to help. "What's up with Potter? It's not like him to not help a child in need." Draco says these last words with sarcaziam. Harry then turns around and walks right
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    tomboykaitie Senior
    T_T That is a buttload to read.
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    gfh012 Novice
    "tongue": please don't write mean stuff in my thread.

    "tomboykatie": Well sorry, you didn't HAVE to read it. but please, don't say you didn't like it just because it's long!!! I've written longer.

    oh, and "Dragonzeye", please let me know what you think when you read it!
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    gfh012
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    DragonzEye Novice
    wow. tht is alot... but it was good! 1 question: was eve under a love potion? and does pansy parkinson ever try to murder u cuz she likes malfoy? lol tht was 2 questions....but good show! good show! oncuour however thts spelled!
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    i don't care if this was posted 2 days ago! i just wanna know how you make one of these! oh God! i sound so desperate!
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    yo!is anybody up at $:39 am? cause i am! lol!
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    gfh012 Novice
    Dragonseye, No pansy doesn't kill Eve. because Draco would kill her! NO, Eve isn't under a love potion, she sees the good in him even if no one else does!!!!! but she doesn't marry Draco... :-(

    Fireprincess, I'm constanly(oops, spelling issues) checking my threads, so feel free to post anytime. If you're asking how I wrote the Eve story? It started out as a dream believe it or not. As for the story, Eve is based on me, and how I would act in the world of Hogwarts. Draco is my favorite character, so it was easy to imagine how he would react to the world I created. As for Harry, I don't like his character as much, so you might notice he's not as nice and conciderate as he is in the books and movies.

    Thank you all! I'll post the rest of the story later.
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    DragonzEye Novice
    kk cuz i was a bit confused wen all of them were o, ur under a love potion, and i though maybe there wud b some sort of rivalry cuz pansy is really draco's gf... also, i like malfoy more than harry, but according to all my friends im a harry potter fan, and it confuses them when i say i dislike hp himself, u no???
    srry 4 babbling, but im just bored
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    gfh012 Novice
    No prob dragonzeye, I babble all the time! :-) it'z not a bad thing. and I totally know what you're saying, about people getting confused about the whole Harry Potter stuff versus the guy himself.

    looking forward to the deathly hallows part 2
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    DragonzEye Novice
    ya me 2...i hav 2 c dethly hallows pt 1 ist...lolz
  • vidya Newbie
    You write really good gfh012. I will call u Eve the name u used in the above story. You r Draco's girl and i am harry's girl but we can still b good frnds. Coz i think Drac is also somewhat cute.... (i know that u don't me to have crush on him..) So c u Eve. U can call me Jennifer (Jenny).. in HP stories but my real name is vidya
  • vidya Newbie
    You write really good gfh012. I will call u Eve the name u used in the above story. You r Draco's girl and i am harry's girl but we can still b good frnds. Coz i think Drac is also somewhat cute.... (i know that u don't me to have crush on him..) So c u Eve. U can call me Jennifer (Jenny).. in HP stories but my real name is vidya

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