Is my book so far alright?
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Thread Topic: Is my book so far alright?
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Alright, that's disgusting
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Lol you will too when you get older I bet! before you ask for more of the story....
I got there first, then we walked to the cafeteria and there was Dalias Kluless. He stood up and walked to us. " Hello children, eat first then we shall be on our way... " Dalias Said, pointing to some food on the table. Me and Zach sat down. I was so excited to get out of this boring place that I ate fast, so did Zach. When we finished Zach only had his drink left so he was aloud to bring it. We walked through the bright hallways of the place we were at till we go to a door. Dalias pointed his index fingure at the door and muttered " Sesame Openy " I almost laughed because it sounded so original for a four year old to say that but an old man? Seriously? But I stopped trying not to laugh when the door made this weird clicking noise and opened up. -
EEP! *reads excitedly*
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omg How in the world will I publish this??? I have a fan already!!!! I'll have to look it up!
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MORE POSTS! *keeps reading*
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almost laughed because it sounded so original for a four year old to say that but an old man? Seriously? But I stopped trying not to laugh when the door made this weird clicking noise and opened up. I just walked through after Dalias, and Zach followed, then me and Zach followed behind Dalias. I felt like a little of a joke so I pointed my index fingur at a door and said in a harsh whisper " Sesame Openy " And seriously, ALL the doors on the street opened wide open! I continued like nothing happened but Zach just stared at me in shock, I couldn't help it, I chuckled. It was just so much fun...
I had a weird sensation when it happened too! I loved it! Dalias stopped and Zach ran into him which made me run into him. I stumbled and just about fell but Zach caught me just in time -
*keeps reading*
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lol I gotta right more girl!
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*keeps reading*
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Hats..... HOLY CRAP! DANG THAT HURT!
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WHAT?!
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I think Adreannah kicks to dang hard..... or its Montgomery....
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Oh, ouch
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Yah... dang... I am recovered... I think... don't get preggo till your 57!
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I'm not getting prego at all!!!!!! I'm gonna adopt!
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