The Adventures of Mr. Hopkins
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There are two college students. Karl and Jessie. They love this beautiful white bunny named Mr. Hopkins. They would do anything for this bunny.
Jessie is the nerd of this friend group. She gets straight A's and is an over achiever. She does all the studying.
Karl is the funny one, while Jessie is the strict one. Karl likes to make jokes. He wants to try to make Jessie laugh, but it never works.
But one day, their bunny gets kidnapped or maybe, just maybe disappeared. -
Karl and Jessie woke up one morning and got ready to go study.
"What is going to happen when we go out?" Jessie asked. "Dang Jessie. Don't be such a wuss," Karl joked. Jessie slapped him on the arm hard. "Ouch! That hurt!" Jessie glared at him. "Don't make those kind of jokes, Karl."
Karl shrugged his shoulders and followed Jessie out of the dorm. They studied at Café Grumpy, a coffee shop not too far from their college dorm.
After they studied, they went back to their dorm. But they came home to find that their bunny was gone.
"Where is Mr. Hopkins?" Jessie asked. "I don't know," Karl told her. "We need to look for him, Jessie." -
Jessie didn't take this all too well. She shook her head, argued, and fought with Karl about going outside of school to look for their bunny.
"I am not going," Jessie told Karl. "He's your bunny too Jessie," Karl pointed out. "I know. I just don't think that this is the right idea. Going out in the city and looking for Mr. Hopkins, yeah, no. Not me," Jessie argued.
Karl got tired of her complaining and dragged her to see their professor named Mr. Jimison. Jessie tried to pull back from Karls grip, she just couldn't get him to let go of her wrist. -
Karl and Jessie made it to their professor's classroom, with all Jessie's complaining and arguing, in about 10 minutes. Karl told Mr. Jimison about what happened. Their professor told them that it happened to him when he was their age and he had to look all over the place to look for his dog.
"I've been there kids," he said. "I know that you're worried about the bunny." Jessie rolled her eyes and slammed her fist against the desk. "This bunny means a lot to us. Can you please help us?" Their professor looked at her with sympathetic eyes. "Yes. I will," he said. "Go to the last place you went. And start from there."
So, they did. They went back to their dorm and saw that the window was open. They left and tried to see where the mess was leading to. -
The first four chapters
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Along the way, the find a kid and his parents. They had gotten to central park and were running out of hope so desperately, they asked the kid if he's seen a rabbit.
"Hey kid have you seen our bunny? He's all white with a red bowtie" Said jessie.
"Actually, yea I think I saw something white hop that way" The kid said as he pointed toward the forest.
"Jesus how in the world did he get so far away" Karol pouted as both headed toward the trees. -
(That was after the 5th chapter)
When they go into the bedroom and Mr. Hopkins is gone, They go out into the city to look for him. On the wat they start to find clues. There was an open window in their dorm, so they assumed he had gotten out.
5th chapter -
7th chapter:
After half an hour Jessie and Karol were getting frantic.
"HEY JESSIE", Karol shouted out, "Look over here I found something."
"A cave!?", jessie said "Why in the world would he be in there?"
Jessie looking at Karol like he was stupid.
"I don’t know man I mean don’t bunnies live in hole in the ground? Mabey he's visiting his mother." Karol laughed and Jessie punched his arm.
"Hey, this is serious we need to find him"
"heh sorr-" Karol got cut off by a loud clang coming from the cave.
"uhm we might need to check that out"
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After half an hour Jessie and Karol were getting frantic.
"HEY JESSIE", Karol shouted out, "Look over here I found something."
"A cave!?", jessie said "Why in the world would he be in there?" Jessie looking at Karol like he was stupid.
"I don’t know man I mean don’t bunnies live in hole in the ground? Mabey he's visiting his mother." Karol laughed and Jessie punched his arm.
"Hey, this is serious we need to find him"
"heh sorr-" Karol got cut off by a loud clang coming from the cave.
"uhm we might need to check that out"
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8th chapter:
"IM going down" Jessie says as she hops in the hole. "you stay up here and watch. Jessie jumped down, using her phone as a flashlight, she carefully crouched through the cave. The cave was barely tall enough to stand in. Back at the top Karol was still looking around for clues when he noticed what looked like the same kid holding.. MR. HOPPKINS! He was climbing down into another hole in the ground?
"Oh man, I got to go get jessie" Karol said running back to the original hole. He called out to jessie multiple times but with no answer.
"welp, guess I'm going in." -
Inside the cave karl found that he was in for more than he bargained for. After he got out the tunnel, he entered a bigger room where he found jessie and Mr.Hoppkins both in cages! Jessie was sleeping, she had gotten knocked out and kidnapped by the true Villan. And standing there next to the cages was no other than the kid and his parents!
"Wait so YOU were the one behind all of this?" karl said confused. The kid laughed mischievously.
"Yep! I fooled you and now your bunny is mine! Your friend here almost spoiled my plans, but I took care of that. Now I just have to find out what to do with you." -
"listen guys I don’t want any problem here. You can't just take some else's pet. Like c'mon man didn’t your parents teach you any better?"
"Actually, no we didn’t" His mom and dad step out of the shadows. "we took this rabbit for our sweet Timmy's birthday, and you can't have It back" karl was getting desperate, he was determined to get his bunny back.
"alright if I can't get my pet back at least give me my friend back. I mean knocking her out was a bit much wasn’t it?" The parents both agreed and went to unlock her cage. It seemed like karl was giving up, but he had a plan. -
"you've got a fair point." Said the dad. Just as they were opening the cage and leaned in to grab jessie, Karl ran up and pushed both in! He grabbed jessie and locked the gate!
"Wah huh? What happened?" Jessie said in a daze as she was just waking up.
"you stay here, and I'll take care of everything." Karl said helping jessie stand. "alright kid, your done here, just give me my bunny back and go home. I don’t want to fight a little kid" The boy frowned and ran up to Karl ready to fight. He threw a punch, but Karl was not affected seeing that Timmy was just a kid. Karl pushed by the kid and grabbed his bunny.
"You guys need to be better parents." He said as he ran out with jessie.
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