The Adams Library

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    Ok so this is where i might post a few stories and such, but not yet, i gotta get some inspiration first.
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    Chapter One:

    Life for Lily hadn’t been the same ever since her thirteenth birthday. In her strange world, whenever someone reached their thirteenth birthday the words of their soulmate appear on them. Lily hated the thought of being told what to do but she despised being told who she could be with even more.

    “Ugh.” Lily thought to herself as she walked through the corridor of her school. It was a cool fall day as she explored around before her classes began. Lily’s day was going just great until she heard the dreaded voice of her enemy, Aiden Williams. “Hey dweeb i guess you’ve got no one to help you today!” He yelled. Lily just turned around and rolled her eyes. “The thought that you can’t come up withA better insult Just tells me exactly who the dweeb is.” Lily said coolly.

    Aiden just rolled his perfect sea green eyes and walked away.

    Lily clutched her bag tighter to her shoulder. The truth was, she and Aiden weren’t destined to be enemies. To Lily, the truth made her want to puke, I fact she remembered the day she learned exactly who her soulmate was.

    She had already blown out her candles on her cake when the time came for her to see what the words her soulmate would say to her would be, and she was dreading every last minute. When she finally pulled up her sleeves here eyes widened, and her mouth fell open. Right there, on her OWN wrist, were the words she’s heard for over three years. HEY DWEEB, was written there. Ever since then her life became a nightmare.
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    dragonsfire Experienced
    "In her strange world..."

    Maybe describe how her world is different from ours? Like, is the sky purple and made of hedgehogs? You're summarising too much here.

    "“Hey dweeb i guess you’ve got no one to help you today!” He yelled."

    What would she need help with? It seems like a random thing unrelated to anything.

    Other than some other formatting things, this is really good!
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    Ok, thanks for the feedback.
    My brain has been blank for a little while so this helped a lot))
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    dragonsfire Experienced
    Yep.
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    Ok, so I’ve decided not to finish my first story idea because I’ve lost interest, i have a couple short stories but I’m going to fix them up a bit.
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    Okay, a question for Spice and Eggaly. I’ve recently thought that it would be fun to write a story for The Files Rp and was wondering what you guys thought. So, what do you think?
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    SprinkledSpice Experienced
    Sorry I didn't see this for a while! I think it'd be cool, but I'd have Leven and Caleb kiss eventually, not in the same day they met. Other than that, by all means!
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    Engle Newbie
    Sure
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    Alright then! I’ll get to it!
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    Ok, so I’m going to do The Files in its own thread. But I do have a story I need feedback on. Well it’s not a full story. But here it is.

    In a world where believers in Christ are executed, seven kids are brought together in mysterious ways as they try to escape the wrath of the United Nations.

    River, Carlos, Jenna, Mark, Oliver, Olivia, and Zion are thrown into the middle of a world that hates them and what they believe in. As they’re on the run from either family, friends, the government, or just themselves in general, they come across eachother and realize that maybe God had brought them there for a reason. Will these seven unlikely friends make it out of this dying world alive or will the peril that lies behind every corner be the exact reason why they were taken. Join them as they journey across the world in search for answers.

    There ya go. Please tell me what any of you think about it.
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    dragonsfire Experienced
    or will the peril that lies behind every corner be the exact reason why they were taken.

    Taken? By what/who?
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    Merida1 Newbie
    Okay so i was just a bit confused on how to say that, but it’s technically saying if they die or not....
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    dragonsfire Experienced
    Oh, ok.
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    Merida1 Novice
    Thanks for looking at it though. :)

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