black blood
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Thread Topic: black blood
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as I walk down the dark abandoned graveyard
I see a strange figure
I see shadows all around me
and I prepare myself to be attacked
I feel black eyes watching me all around
the strange figure crawls towards me
as I stand there, I see the face of death
it is a pumpkin
then I look around
and scream -
I like is good. it sounds like something in a horror movie or book.
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please comment on it, and also rate it from one to ten, I hope its good
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yea its really good dragon i really liked it
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1 to 10 it a big time 9
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does it sound like soul eater?
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8
It's good, but could use improvements, no offense.^_^'
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