A poem thread for me, Br0wnieBunny.
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Thread Topic: A poem thread for me, Br0wnieBunny.
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(Wow. This is old... *brushes dust off*)
I look at the sky, with my dull green eyes
I watch the clouds, my thoughts are loud
My pupils dance, I risk every chance
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Silence.
My fingers tap away at the computer screen. -
(Look how close my bar is... :D)
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Your poems are really good :3
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Thanks.))
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Ultimate revive from the grave.
Holy crap.
Yes, I'm using this again.
Just not right now because my muse is awful. -
S, for words, "Shh, go to sleep".
L, for the lids, my eyelids, getting heavy.
E, for exhaustion, I've worked far too much today.
E, for earning, earning the pleasure of resting.
P, for perfect, perfect describing the plots of my dreams.
Y, for why, why am I not asleep yet? -
Who is that man there
He is so handsome and stay
Where is he going now? -
Why does my heart swell
Over the littlest things
Why does my mind dwell
And allow me to grow wings
I can't risk the feeling
Of doing the unthinkable
But when I'm around them
I seem to feel invincible
I feel so afraid to step
Forward and be brave
I would diminish my rep
And I need to be saved -
The sun is warm
The grass is green
The lake is blue
The bird's eye is keen
The clouds absentmindedly
Dance and soar
My heart aches and longs
I need more
Let me stay in this daydream
I'm too happy now
To look back, turn around
My imagination turns loud
Reality is too unbearable
The weight on my mind
I can't take it anymore
Let's turn my life on rewind
I want to be a child with no worries at all
Instead of a victim who can do nothing but fall -
I always reread these and honestly, I think I'm kinda rusty. I feel like I depend on rhyme and some rhymes unable to be made sense of in a particular line lowers the quality of the poem.
There's an obvious pattern. I wonder how I can fix it? How do you even make poems without rhyme, not including haikus? -
Roses are red
Violets are blue
If I had to pick a star
It'd be Nagisa Shingetsu
With blue hair and eyes
A soft blue and smile
That sparkle and shine
It takes me a while
To contain myself, you're so beautiful
You're so intelligent, and you're so special
I would give up the world to hold you in my arms
I'm not sure why, but you have a certain charm
A type of charisma that makes my heart flutter
It makes my thoughts race, it makes me melt like butter
And to wrap it up, I'm here to say
I love you and you keep me going everyday -
Ha haaaaa that was so cheesy xD
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