Hard To Get Noticed In Literature...Do You Like This?
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Thread Topic: Hard To Get Noticed In Literature...Do You Like This?
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I wasnt dead. I survived. I didnt understand why it was so hard to believe. One thought had come to my mind, Evan. I jerked my head from side to side. Finally, I noticed his body on the floor about five feet away, his chest expanding with every breath he took. He was unconscious, I could tell, but alive. Thats all that really mattered. We were both alive. Alive. That was such a meaningful word at the time. It gave me hope that we were strong enough to stay living.Hope.
The place was so dark.so unwelcoming. Flickering lights, cement walls, concrete floors that really didnt feel good on my posterior. Red stains were noticeable in a few places, which sent a shiver down my spine. I wanted to scream. The urge was extremely powerful, but I forced myself not to. That wouldve only made whoever kidnapped us, come to see what was up. I thought that maybe I could escape. Help Evan escape. Just maybe.
I suddenly dropped the pen. I couldnt write anymore. The memory was too gruesome, and he was making me write it. He was making me, just so I could be even more afraid. I felt the cold metal against the back of my neck. At least I had written the minimum, If I had been a word less, that knife would have come up in front of my and puncture me however many times the man in black wanted. -
Very nice.
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Yay! Thanks, Sun.. And, Typo: Me....In Front of Me
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Maru, and you're welcome.
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:)
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X sigh X secrets and dangers doesn't ever get noticed either
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Aww....
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check it out if you want wolflove
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OKAI! :D
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