Does this sound good so far?

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Thread Topic: Does this sound good so far?

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  I Forgot My Name Experienced

  13 years ago
  I have a smile,
  That masks the tears,
  And my dreams are being crushed.
  Life isn't always,
  What it seems,
  And I'm trying to sew up the holes..
  
  I can't stop dreaming!
  I can't stop wishing!
  On a star,
  I fall apart,
  Wishing.. That I can be with you.
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  AudreeForever Experienced

  13 years ago
  So good. I wish I could write something like that. :/
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  Ashl3y Novice

  13 years ago
  Woah!! That is awesome!!!
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  Lucyheartfillia Novice

  13 years ago
  That's good! :D

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