Here's a poem. Feedback appreciated.~
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Thread Topic: Here's a poem. Feedback appreciated.~
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The more I look, the more I feel
The eyes of mine tries not to kill
My laughing shows sheer jealousy
With radiance that is inevitably
Her face may not show her love
But right to her heart and even above
She knows how to love
And as to love comes hate
And as to hate comes love
Not matter, even reversed
You will always turn soul-(originally out heart but whateves)numb
No matter what yoy say
No matter what thou threat
You will act like we never met
I say it's on in the first
But once you confess
I feel as you're a curse
As once a man said
All good things must come to an end
Just like a fairy tale
They say
The end
Every day(now currently added)
As not the end is just the beginning
Your destiny and future levitating
Even after argue to argue
As many say
To different means
I will always say
I love you -
I didn't really work hard on this I was done with my work really early but then I saw something and I got a little overwhelmed and wrote it without thinking that much
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