I need constructive criticism
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Thread Topic: I need constructive criticism
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First, hi everyone!! I haven't been on in so long... anyway, I'm auditioning for a writing class next year, and I need to know what you think of this poem I wrote as my audition piece. The theme is Great Depression and we were assigned photos, here's mine:
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Weird, link didn't work. Must be my phone. One sec...
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Hey, Girl! :D
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Hey Anime!! Missed you!
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I missed you to! *tackles*
Everything has changed! Everybody hates me now, like Everybody, My reputation is all ruined on here! But, now your are here, so I'm not alone because my friend is here(you)! :D -
There is also mods. And more drama..
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Oh well that all sucks!!! Except for me being your best friend :D
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Is Liz still here? And Bianca (Death Star)?
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Bianca comes on OCCASIONALLY.
And sorry to ask, who is Liz again? ene -
Oh God, I missed you gurl! ;u; /huggles
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Missed you too!!!!!! *huggles back*
Liz's username is... umm... XD one sec -
liz_king97
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I gotta go shower, I'll be back in less than 30 min. :P
Just talking to you makes it worth getting re-addicted to this site! -
Hm.. Liz... Hmm.. I haven't been on here more frequently as when I was actually genuine and kind! :( But probably she hasn't been on here alot anymore..
How was new years, Christmas, Halloween! How was your beginningo 2014!?:D -
Okay, have a nice shower. Also, keep the water warm. xD
Aww, thanks Homie! :)
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