.-. Im gonna do my 3 oh clock in the morning running now.
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Thread Topic: .-. Im gonna do my 3 oh clock in the morning running now.
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Oh okay. :P
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Hey, can you do me a favor?
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Sure.
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Okay. Well, Im writing this book...
But I've finally cone to the dreaded death scene of Bailey ;~;
If I type it up, will you tell me if its good or not? -
Yeah gladly. :)
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Okay. Gimme a few minutes. :)
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Okay. :)
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Her earsplitting scream cuts through me like a knife. I try to tell myself that all of this is some cruel, twisted nightmare, forced upon me by my demented mind. Forced by my insanity. Red stains her dress, her hair matted, my soul turning blacker and black by every second by agonizing second.
"Ethan." Her voice is barely audible. I force myself to listen( to take in her last breaths.
"What is it, Bailey?" She gasped for needed oxygen, coughing hoaresly.
"I-I never loved..." she began. It hits me.
"No. Bailey. Don't say it. Please..." I pleed desperately.
"I never loved you." Her last breath makes me fel as though my bodily functions are going to shut down. Never loved me.
"Why?" I sob. Her blood stained my clothes. I look up, look to the shattered mirror. My relfection sickens me
"That's why. You're the monter. That why..." And that's when darkness crashes into me.
Yeah...Firat draft material. But whatever....How is it for a first draft? -
*Blacker and blacker
*Listen,
*Reflection
*That's why -
*Monster
And
*Facepalm* The blood splattered mirror. -.-' -
I like it. :)
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You're not just saying that to make me feel good, right? xP
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No I'm serious I really like it. I think if it was a book I could really get into it,
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Aw. Thank you. x3 I have three others, but this one is my favoriteeee. :D
Mainly because I did research on Schizephrenia for six hours. O_O -
XD Cool.
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