Song writting help?
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Thread Topic: Song writting help?
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I posted a whole start
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Yeah I like it but, it isn't good enough. And it doesn't really rhyme. I've already tried to make it sound right, but it doesn't really work with what you've got. I want it to start with what Beatle Obessed put. Do you think you can go from that?
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I really don't know. Maybe. But it'll take a bit longer. Maybe an hour or two, maybe more
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Maybe I can help. But, I'll need to a lil' more bou' your grandma. Has she always been there for you? What was something nice you did together?
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Oh! I got something. :3 (It sounds good with the tune for "I won't give up" by Jason Mraz)
You've always been my friend
Our friendship will never end
I'll be there for you
There's nothing we can't do
Don't close your eyes
Stay with me till the sunrise
Can't you just stay for
Another year or two?
:) An entire first verse right there. xP -
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