Song writting help?

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Thread Topic: Song writting help?

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    DeathStar321 Experienced
    I posted a whole start
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    LemonLime Junior
    Yeah I like it but, it isn't good enough. And it doesn't really rhyme. I've already tried to make it sound right, but it doesn't really work with what you've got. I want it to start with what Beatle Obessed put. Do you think you can go from that?
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    DeathStar321 Experienced
    I really don't know. Maybe. But it'll take a bit longer. Maybe an hour or two, maybe more
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    Strangeling Novice
    Maybe I can help. But, I'll need to a lil' more bou' your grandma. Has she always been there for you? What was something nice you did together?
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    Strangeling Novice
    Oh! I got something. :3 (It sounds good with the tune for "I won't give up" by Jason Mraz)

    You've always been my friend
    Our friendship will never end
    I'll be there for you
    There's nothing we can't do
    Don't close your eyes
    Stay with me till the sunrise
    Can't you just stay for
    Another year or two?

    :) An entire first verse right there. xP
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    LemonLime Junior
    ):

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