Poem
Thread Topic: Poem
Skaterchic
Joined: Dec 19, '09
Status: Newbie | 2010-02-03 19:05:21 |
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opps let me rephrase that: Angel are with God and Jesus In our world but,up in heaven They can talk real soft at midnight... And give you a better life with everyone | |
I like music
Joined: Oct 26, '09
Status: Novice | 2010-02-04 08:48:07 |
| That's a nice poem, it's kind of... soft and mystical, and like, I can't describe it, it's nice. | |
Anastasia
Joined: Jun 11, '09
Status: Novice | 2010-02-04 12:35:41 |
Awesome poems you guys  | |
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Skaterchic
Joined: Dec 19, '09
Status: Newbie | 2010-02-04 21:37:45 |
| I wrote that in church. It was my assiment in 4th grade but then I quit when one year later. | |
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Anastasia
Joined: Jun 11, '09
Status: Novice | 2010-02-05 02:26:57 |
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Hey I wrote this poem earlier today. It's a bit weird lol it's all what first popped into my head. It's called Beautiful Wolf Beautiful wolf with gray fur, eyes the tone of orange flames; I watch as you howl at the full moon You are free to do as you please. Every week you stare death in the face, knowing it's coming soon Yet you are not afraid to die, your pack watches over as you sleep. Loyal loved ones and truue friends, how nice. Oh beautiful wolf, I wish I could be like you. At night you dream sweet dreams even with the chance tomorrow you won't open your eyes You lived a great life, led many out of danger's way So selfless and giving though you are a wild animal You are a role model for all the young cubs Beautiful wolf, your time has finally come After respects are paid your pack moves on Leaving your body for the vultures and bugs | |
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I like music
Joined: Oct 26, '09
Status: Novice | 2010-02-05 03:26:35 |
Wow, that was so Amazing I could never write anything that good.  You should work as a writer when you're older, you'll get lots of 
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Anastasia
Joined: Jun 11, '09
Status: Novice | 2010-02-05 13:54:18 |
| LOL thanks I actually would love to be a writer, I usually write like poems, songs and stories | |
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I like music
Joined: Oct 26, '09
Status: Novice | 2010-02-06 01:30:47 |
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I've written three novels: - Dreams come true (130 pages) - The forest empress (185 pages) - Pearl (A gift for my mum) (Only 16 pages but still...) And I'm writing another, it's called The vampire's boyfriend I wrote a short version of it in the Write your short stories here thread. | |
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Kelly_jay
Joined: Oct 27, '09
Status: Newbie | 2010-02-07 19:54:28 |
| Ok well i had to write a sonnet for my english class so here it is- she is the life that holds my love i would trade in my soul for a life time with her the melody of her words is like the chirp of a dove i wouldn't trade in my love for the richest of furs her caution is what intrigues me any barriers that come will be dismissed for i love her so much i shall have to say a few the fire and passion burned when our lips met- by the way that was in the view of a guy cause i'm a chick:) | |
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I like music
Joined: Oct 26, '09
Status: Novice | 2010-02-08 02:36:35 |
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That was very beautiful, I liked it so much, it was dreamy! But what exactly is a sonnet? I don't think I've come across it before... | |
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Kelly_jay
Joined: Oct 27, '09
Status: Newbie | 2010-02-08 15:22:13 |
| Thanx:) i dont entirely remember but i look through my notebook and see | |
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I like music
Joined: Oct 26, '09
Status: Novice | 2010-02-09 02:47:27 |
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I want to write a poem about. No Roady! Stop! Don't write one about vampires! Resist the addiction! Anyway, um... uh... WTF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! | |
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I like music
Joined: Oct 26, '09
Status: Novice | 2010-02-09 02:50:02 |
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Ok, this is about the night (In a dreamy way that isn't scary and doesn't envolve vamps, I swear to god!) Under the sky I finally see A world that seems just for me The moon in the center shining bright It and the stars give their lovely light Where the world hides from day Night is the time to sleep not play | |
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I like music
Joined: Oct 26, '09
Status: Novice | 2010-02-09 02:50:56 |
| What d'ya think? Was it ok? OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!! DON'T TELL ME IT WAS GAY!!!!!! | |
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Kelly_jay
Joined: Oct 27, '09
Status: Newbie | 2010-02-09 07:32:24 |
| No it was really good i really liked it:) |
