Forced to be with him... | Comments

Okay, I'm so sorry I haven't seen this! Set up is looking pretty good. Simple, but to the point. I really like the narratives, it's nice to see the point of view from someone who knows everything. It's pretty nice. Anyways, I'm picturing Drake with brown hair in a skater kind of hairstyle. With blue eyes and a wardrobe of black jeans, with a bullet style belt and a shirt with a rocker skull in the centre and flaming shirkens around it (don't ask why that just poped up in my head) anyways, this is looking good and I'm glad you went with this one because you're narrative is amazing, keep up the good work.

Horribly sorry I wasn't here to read this first part! I was catching up on some writing plans, which I just finished, and you'll hear about it when I comment on the second part! So off I go :)

THis was great, I really like the idea! However, it's spelled angel, not angle. That's really the only thing that caught my eye, can't wait for the next one!!

Great story overall! angel*

I really liked this! Please make part 2 soon!

I liked it! Keep up the good work and I cant wait for part 2 :D

U coulda just said how he looked like sheesh

Part 2!!! :)

i likeit, but make it more exciting pleez:)