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I got mary sue...

My oc is called... I don't really have a name yet??? Anyways, she's supposed to be a goddess who has had a ridiculous amount of lovers (not poking fun at any religons here I'm making up a whole universe..) and sells drugs to her great great great grandchildren. So yeah.. she's just a wee bit silly...

My oc's name is Sparklekitty cause that's her species hehe, she's a female and has purple and pink sparkly hair and black scleras in both eyes [in her universe weird hair and animals on hind legs are normal], her nationality is Dogmatican [imaginary continent in imaginary planet], due to a radiation attack from the Bowraokians, her species was wiped out entirely

I got a 25% (let’s go!) and I was describing my one piece oc 🗣🔥🙏 Her name is Carmen, she’s 14, she was a stowaway, and is now being forced to clean up around the ship as punishment. I gave her a pretty sad yet graphic backstory, but I was worried that it would turn her into a

Mary sue lol

Carmen was born on February 7th, which in her (TOTALLY FICTIONAL. THIS RELIGION/CULT DOES NOT EXSIST!!) culture’s religion was a day of bad omens or death. She was seen as the devil’s little hellspawn, so she was instantly taken away to live in a convent (church) home. She had a somewhat normal childhood, besides being forced to read scriptures and attend temples, but it all came crashing down when she turned 10 and was allowed to attend more ‘mature’ sermons. Basically, she found out her religion was basically just a cult that did a ton of graphic messed up s---. Yippee. Anyways, she can’t see the convent the same anymore, so she goes to the pastor to ask him questions about the cult and why they do the things that they do, only for him to hurt her. (iykyk) she couldn’t take it anymore and ran away, hopping on the nearest ship possible

Based on powers, she really doesn’t have any, all she can really do is like punch idk she is apart of the ‘coward trio’ (for non one piece fans it’s the only three characters who don’t have a special devil fruit or gear or haki) and tends to run or hide when faced with an enemy. She also is just your average teenager, so she doesn’t really care about her job and sometimes half-asses it, and can come across as lazy or greedy, often doing things for her own benefit or gain. She is a people pleaser, who sometimes is a doormat and lets people walk all over her. I personally think a 25% is perfect, but what do yall think?

WHAT ARE THESE QUESTIONS DUDE??? THERE COULD DEFINITELY BE SOME BETTER QUESTIONS HERE 😭😭😭 I MEAN IT LIKE, like brooo, "There could be some spice up" HUHH??? THERE COULD BE SOME BETTER QUESTIONS OR THE OPTION TO PUT IN BETWEEN ANSWERS, i swear i don't mean to be rude but WHY THE HELL ARE THERE ANSWERS WITH QUESTION MARKS and most are "yes" or "no" but never "maybe" or "sometimes" or "I'm not sure".

ALSO, to make this fair I'll explain about my character and a little about the story.

Yanni: boy in the last year of middle school, experiencing puberty, some changes in personality, he's a just a confused little fella

In the story, he slowwwly realize he might be gay, so that makes him worried, but the main thing causing him trouble is bad grades. Oh and there's also his childhood friend that also went through some changes, but in a different way, which ended up causing Yanni a few "problems" yk

But if you pay close attention, the reason why the character is so simple is because it's going through character development and there's not questions that i can put answers for it(literally)

I got 6%. Thought I'd get more tbh

Ayaki Sato is her name. She's my Bungo Stray Dogs oc (one of the many), she works as a doctor for the Port Mafia. Despite mostly being understanding, anxious and a doormat, she's an hyper-competent doctor, and medicine attracted her from a young age. She enjoys saving people... And her good traits end there. In order of entering medicine, she ran away from home (she didn't care about her old parents anyway) and stalk a doctor that worked for a criminal group and repeteadly attempted to make him teach her, until he did. She learned greatly and has a abnormal talent for medicine, but she isn't usually hired due to not actually having a formal education, and got fired from the little borderline illegal hospitals she actually worked for as a nurse, due to having a severe issue related to shouting or even hitting other nurses or doctors for little mistakes, sometimes mistakes she caused by overworking them and acting like she's their boss (which nobody appreciated). She strongly believes it was THEIR fault for being "awful doctors" and she HAD to command them, which is bulls---. She's too passionate about medicine and believes that people NEED her, and specifically her. She lacks a set of morals, and started working for the Port Mafia, since they didn't require a full education and she knew they likely needed doctors, and would give them the respect she deserves.

She saved another OC of mine, Shinai Mahoou, who has the Ability of modifying (not creating or destroying new molecules, simply modifying them) the general molecules of things and people alike. He's nor a villain nor a hero, and simply roams about with little purpose. Ayaki saved him after a surprise attack that left him almost dead, and he respects her greatly, and is even a bit bizarrely too grateful, even for the average person. That said, he's kinda the only person that respects her so much... You know, doormat doctor in a mafia and all...

Dimitri Zertek liberium III es un humano inmortal que controla la realidad, de 30.000.00 años, no recuerda ni su nacionalid ni su pasado más allá de 1789, fue un agente secreto, actualmente es un vagabundo, aunque fiscicamente es normal, es listo pero no es el más inteligente (El Pingüino de la misma obra es mil veces más listo), la unica razon por la que solo es un 19% Gary-Stu es porque no es generico, esta salido de mi locura en un universo absolutamente loco. Es del universo "Relatos del fin del tiempo" de mi creacion (Nortland_Autor), lo pueden encontrar en wattpad.

I got 23%. My characters name is Riot and he's an elf with the power to summon the strength of the sun and use the fire/light from it. His powers are pretty weak at night and insanely powerful durring sunny days. His skin cant take the heat and burns everytime he uses his powers (He has server nerve damage in his hands). His ears are too large and he has ugly ahh scars, He's 46 with long dark blue hair and orange eyes. He's never fallen in love (he's aroace) but he was manipulated as a teen into thinking an abusive relationship with a human was love and ended up with a kid he didn't know about until the end of the main story. When he was a kid he was extremely bullied for being skinny and having large ears. One sunny day he accidentally lashed out on the school yard and permanently damaged a classmates wings by burning off the feathers. He got sent home that day and walked into his mother violently stabbing his abusive father. His father was the most respected knight in the kingdom but took a lot of his anger and stress out in his family. Riot ended up being sent to live with his aunt which is where he got his nickname; "riot" while his mother was on trial. eventually his mother got sentanced to 130 years in prison and riot, with no guardians was sent to a boarding school where he met the abusive human. and that's like all idk i don't think he's a gary sue😭🙏

The oc i used for this quiz is Adrian Yves Rosewine. He is a human, 6,4 feet tall, hazelnut medium long hair and natural indigo eyes. He is actually 400 years old but he looks like in his late 20s. For the backstory, i don't know how to execute it but i decided to make his backstory to be an orphan who gets adopted by Orphanage and actually the head of the orphanage is actually a fallen angel and told him that he is destined to be more than he was, the prophecy told her that Adrian will become either a hero or a villain. His power which in this universe i called it a "Stern" is named "All For The Memories" which is he able to manipulate memories, he could wipe all of one individual's memories of their past, create a fake memory, and stuff. He can't die as long people still remember him, so when people know him that will become a new memory so when he get stabbed, killed, choked, and etc he can't die as long there are lot of people remember him that's why he can't aged and he still alive until now. (Actually, this character is mostly inspired by Black swan from hsr, Fyodor from Bungou Stray dogs, Kagaya from Demon Slayer.) And imagine what if 8B people know him, he will never be die.

(I'm not a native english speaker so sorry in advance)

I got 16% and I'm kinda embarrassed because I'm a big hater of Mary Sue characters ^^"

I have this character since 2017. It's my fursona and like many furries I want him to be a better version of myself

He's one of many benkarts of some dragon (witch are" The Rich" of this world) but he's not special there in fact so many that it's kinda annoying, but it's impotent for the plot. He was found one the "outside" in one of survivals villages during routine expedition, now he's 26 and living with his step father in postapo world destroyed by climate change in one of many underground scientists occupied volts, (it's a glob wide operation which aims to mined most of the metals from earth and send them to moon where're currently built bases and rocket to eventually send The Rich who are waiting on earth orbit to Mars for good) he's a leader of small team of bioengineers (which is not such a big deal bc there is like 2000 ppl in here and half of them are scientists so there is like 30 team leaders and even more ppl in "the main council"

But about him: he's good at cooking, likes to play on electric guitar but is not very good at it, have a ton of plants in his room and keeps a lot of modified insects as a hobby, he's not really empathetic, workaholic, pedantic, germofobic, trying to not fall for anyone (but sucks at it), usually stoik at work, but swears a lot when irritated, and I think it's funny bc at home he and his father always are yelling at each other for no reason just to be mean, but they love each other and they know that bc they spend a ton of quality time together xD

But the plot is that he discover that there is big black market for "dragon parts" and his father is heavily involved and was using him for that, so his trying to escape the volt but his only friend and lover gets killed in the process (he was part dragon too) so now with minimal equipment he's trying to get to nearest volt (with is like in th

I couldn't get an accurate result because in the backstory option there was nothing that said "they were the one that caused the pain" lol. I was doing the main antagonist who is a serial killer. She doesn't have any trauma, she just...wants to be a serial killer. 54% mary sue, so apparently she's well-balanced...I hope that's true XD

I’m a little surprised tbh my character I was testing is the main antagonist and main character of my story I always thought he was a bit Mary sueish because if his overly tragic past I thought he would get higer

Your character is 9% a Mary Sue! 9%

Characters at this level could probably use some spicing up without any damage. Go ahead and make her a little prettier! Please remember that the traits listed in this test are not in themselves bad, but can be be bad when added up. I am not trying to bash your character.

The OC I used for this was Maria Frollo or Maria Gabrielle Alice Frollo if you want her full name and is the biological daughter of Disney’s Claude Frollo. She has her father’s high cheekbones, long nose and gaunt features. Her mother, Alice had 1 child (Maria) then died, leaving Frollo a widower which was another step to his total start of darkness. Maria has her mother’s mud brown hair and grey eyes, hooded like Alice and Frollo’s.

She also needs a cane due to badly breaking her ankle and a lot of her lower leg when she fell a storey off Notre Dame Cathedral. For her personality at the start , Maria is intelligent, kind and witty but due to isolation, is also naive, insensitive and suspicious. The deadly sin my character fits into is wrath as she often feels extreme anger, particularly at her father in the fanfic. Maria is 22 (8 years older than me). She grew up with Quasimodo who is a year younger than her and sees him as her brother.

25% - Human girl introduced in ER waiting room, time freezes, Grim f---ing Reaper appears and is like “Oh s---, you can see me” so they take her to the spirit world and she ends up meeting a bunch of gods that represent abstract human emotions (but not like the Greek gods or anything similar except for basic design inspiration). She’s got one prophecy that’s barely a prophecy that just says that “Hey, we got a god of birth and a god of dying, we need a god of living” and she ends up being that “god” after laying the previous god of living (antagonist) to rest.

She’s got no trauma, but she is adopted. Named Iris; she’s got this brownish-blonde hair in the physical world, but because appearances change based on souls in the spirit world she has this light purple/lilac hair. Her eyes don’t change, and they’re brown. Literally nobody romances her because she’s aroace (dunno why there isn’t a “nobody falls in love with them” option and the minimum is 1 person) and nobody “tries to fix her” or whatever.

She’s just good vibes in a pastel package surrounded by the immortal skittle squad.

I got 16%

so basically they're an icewing from wof. no frostscales or animus or any other special stuff ig

I got 24%

The charater I did was Saskue Uchiha. Even though its not my charater.

23% for my BNHA OC, Miwa Shimura.
SPOILERS AHEAD

She’s Shigaraki’s older sister by 5 years who was separated from him after THAT DAY. She was at summer camp when his quirk activated, so she survived. The HPSC took her in since she was Nana’s granddaughter, so they figured she’d make a good hero. She met Hawks when he was 7 and she was 10 and they became friends (since they were the only kids).

Flash forward to when she’s 25, Shigaraki’s running wild and All Might tells her he’s her brother. From then on, she’s convinced she’ll be able to fix him, and he doesn’t even know.

(She looks a lot like Nana, which makes All Might… bittersweet..?)

I got 23% for my DnD character, Valentine. He is a tiefling bard turned serial killer. He hunts down the people involved with the brutal murder of his mother, often adding people who remind him of said killers to his list. I made him for our villain campaign and he's been very fun to play so far. He does show empathy for survivors of abuse as his mother was one as well and he is a FIRM believer in "if you have been wronged, return the favor tenfold". He fully believes that he is a hero in his mind doing everyone else a favor as he takes out people he deems as immoral and abusive. His family was a part of a circus which is why I decided to make my villain a bard, who is currently multiclassing warlock who serves Desirat. I'm not planning for him to change his ways as I've decided he's been doing this long enough to where there is no turning back, especially considering there is a hefty bounty for his head and he refuses to go to jail. He does not have a happy ending, find the love of his life, gets married, and has kids off in the country. He reopens the circus where the tragedy started and devotes himself to Desirat. He continues to conduct horrific murders and becomes his own demented ringleader.

"I received 18%, I consider it a good result. Well, of course, the grade isn't perfect, but I'll work on it and come back here. The character has nothing of mine, and is even of a different gender. His name is Baltazar, and he is a young adult at the age of 36 (looks his age). I didn't mention it earlier, but he is an elf (in his world, there are plenty of supernatural beings, and they keep their distance from humans). As for the history, I have everything done. His father was the leader of the Dashwood clan, and his mother was a warrior of the Teko clan. Unfortunately, she passed away during childbirth, and the father, who never wanted a child and didn't have time to take care of him, handed him over to his relative from another clan. When he grew up between two clans, a war broke out, and some children were afraid of him, while others treated him as an enemy. He tried to compensate for his genes with studying and hard work, but it didn't always work out. He was both intelligent and humorous, so he got along well with animals and excelled in academics, but he was clumsy in combat and magic studies. He was chosen as the guardian of dragons. (This role involves living away from the village in a large building and taking care of magical creatures.) He liked it because he had contact with magnificent creatures and could train with his new master, who was an elf. He continued his education until he became an adult. After a while, his master died, and he decided to take on his first student, who was a hybrid of a human and a wolf. Aster, as his student was called, was energetic, but it was hard for him to focus. Unfortunately, he died at the hands of a warrior from the Dashwood clan, and Baltazar blamed himself for it for the rest of his life. Some time passed, and he learned that he had siblings, but that's a long side story. Returning to the present. He decided to mentor another student, this time a hybrid of an elf and a deer. He trained him as best as he could. He on

I got 10%, to be honest thats a little less I would have expected a little more. So her name is Leyla Fahmi, and she has a flower shop. She's also a Vampire in secret, in a world where Vampires get hunted down by the government. She's tall, lanky and is very thin, with very long hair that she mostly keeps in a braid. She's an escaped Vampire from the research centers and still tries to recover from what happened there. (Drug abuse, experiments). Well so there is this one usual customer of hers and they start talking very much and at least she is starting to get feelings for her. Comes out the usual customer, is a Vampire hunter but she doesn't finds out about Leylas real identity. Of course she won't confront her about it and keeps the lie up and of course it has consequences.

I got 31 percent my character has 2 alters that commit some really questionable things and all that she can do is watch well only with one alter her actions are slightly better than the other and with the other one it's just a complete different person and she can only switch back when the alters have their fun and she's just crying like holy s--- what did I just do she's dark skinned with curly dark hair with a Pink highlight she has dark brown eyes she wears cute clothing and doesn't attract attention her name is rose. It's pretty notice able which alter is controlling her because when shes in the 1st alter she has slightly less curly hair and with the second one it's not curly and is pointy her hair is short also her alters keep terrorizing this one guy named moon I don't have the confidence to tell you what they do but imma tell ya it uhh it... Gets em hard but they don't actually do anything he just got a dirty mind as you can guess the non alter has a crush on him but is too scared bc of what her alters have been doing. Any questions?