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I got 16%

so basically they're an icewing from wof. no frostscales or animus or any other special stuff ig

I got 24%

The charater I did was Saskue Uchiha. Even though its not my charater.

I got 28%.

My OC, Sebby, is a sort-of self-insert, since he's named after me. His eyes are blue and his hair is black.

In my world, Sebby's a good fighter in the world, as he has a black belt in hie main martial art, Shotokan karate. Like me, he comes from Puerto Rico. However, he has a horrible past, as his parents were killed during a horrible accident by the Kaboom Organization. As a result, he now lives with his friends in the National Fighter House, where he swears revenge against the Kaboom Organization.

Oh, and he's also a bad singer and can't write a good song. But he is a fanatic of pinball and thrill rides, just like me.

If you have any suggestions about the other OCs in my world (who I try to come up) let me know.

23% for my BNHA OC, Miwa Shimura.
SPOILERS AHEAD

She’s Shigaraki’s older sister by 5 years who was separated from him after THAT DAY. She was at summer camp when his quirk activated, so she survived. The HPSC took her in since she was Nana’s granddaughter, so they figured she’d make a good hero. She met Hawks when he was 7 and she was 10 and they became friends (since they were the only kids).

Flash forward to when she’s 25, Shigaraki’s running wild and All Might tells her he’s her brother. From then on, she’s convinced she’ll be able to fix him, and he doesn’t even know.

(She looks a lot like Nana, which makes All Might… bittersweet..?)

I got 23% for my DnD character, Valentine. He is a tiefling bard turned serial killer. He hunts down the people involved with the brutal murder of his mother, often adding people who remind him of said killers to his list. I made him for our villain campaign and he's been very fun to play so far. He does show empathy for survivors of abuse as his mother was one as well and he is a FIRM believer in "if you have been wronged, return the favor tenfold". He fully believes that he is a hero in his mind doing everyone else a favor as he takes out people he deems as immoral and abusive. His family was a part of a circus which is why I decided to make my villain a bard, who is currently multiclassing warlock who serves Desirat. I'm not planning for him to change his ways as I've decided he's been doing this long enough to where there is no turning back, especially considering there is a hefty bounty for his head and he refuses to go to jail. He does not have a happy ending, find the love of his life, gets married, and has kids off in the country. He reopens the circus where the tragedy started and devotes himself to Desirat. He continues to conduct horrific murders and becomes his own demented ringleader.

"I received 18%, I consider it a good result. Well, of course, the grade isn't perfect, but I'll work on it and come back here. The character has nothing of mine, and is even of a different gender. His name is Baltazar, and he is a young adult at the age of 36 (looks his age). I didn't mention it earlier, but he is an elf (in his world, there are plenty of supernatural beings, and they keep their distance from humans). As for the history, I have everything done. His father was the leader of the Dashwood clan, and his mother was a warrior of the Teko clan. Unfortunately, she passed away during childbirth, and the father, who never wanted a child and didn't have time to take care of him, handed him over to his relative from another clan. When he grew up between two clans, a war broke out, and some children were afraid of him, while others treated him as an enemy. He tried to compensate for his genes with studying and hard work, but it didn't always work out. He was both intelligent and humorous, so he got along well with animals and excelled in academics, but he was clumsy in combat and magic studies. He was chosen as the guardian of dragons. (This role involves living away from the village in a large building and taking care of magical creatures.) He liked it because he had contact with magnificent creatures and could train with his new master, who was an elf. He continued his education until he became an adult. After a while, his master died, and he decided to take on his first student, who was a hybrid of a human and a wolf. Aster, as his student was called, was energetic, but it was hard for him to focus. Unfortunately, he died at the hands of a warrior from the Dashwood clan, and Baltazar blamed himself for it for the rest of his life. Some time passed, and he learned that he had siblings, but that's a long side story. Returning to the present. He decided to mentor another student, this time a hybrid of an elf and a deer. He trained him as best as he could. He on

I got 10%, to be honest thats a little less I would have expected a little more. So her name is Leyla Fahmi, and she has a flower shop. She's also a Vampire in secret, in a world where Vampires get hunted down by the government. She's tall, lanky and is very thin, with very long hair that she mostly keeps in a braid. She's an escaped Vampire from the research centers and still tries to recover from what happened there. (Drug abuse, experiments). Well so there is this one usual customer of hers and they start talking very much and at least she is starting to get feelings for her. Comes out the usual customer, is a Vampire hunter but she doesn't finds out about Leylas real identity. Of course she won't confront her about it and keeps the lie up and of course it has consequences.

I got 31 percent my character has 2 alters that commit some really questionable things and all that she can do is watch well only with one alter her actions are slightly better than the other and with the other one it's just a complete different person and she can only switch back when the alters have their fun and she's just crying like holy s--- what did I just do she's dark skinned with curly dark hair with a Pink highlight she has dark brown eyes she wears cute clothing and doesn't attract attention her name is rose. It's pretty notice able which alter is controlling her because when shes in the 1st alter she has slightly less curly hair and with the second one it's not curly and is pointy her hair is short also her alters keep terrorizing this one guy named moon I don't have the confidence to tell you what they do but imma tell ya it uhh it... Gets em hard but they don't actually do anything he just got a dirty mind as you can guess the non alter has a crush on him but is too scared bc of what her alters have been doing. Any questions?

lol i got like 23% or something, the mc of my story is a guy named niko and admittedly his history is a bit of a clich: his mother had an affair while married and he has an older half-brother named quentin that wasnt an affair child, nikos mother admitted to her husband that she had an affair but they didnt divorce because her husband wanted quentin to have two parents in his life so niko was either ignored or treated like garbage for most of his childhood, and the inciting incident of the story occurs when quentin is 10 and niko is 8. quentin attempts to strangle niko because recently his father moved to taking his anger out on him, so he figures if the source of his anger (nikos existence) was gone, then his dad would like him again. he chickens out and the incident traumatizes them both, yay! growing up quentin resented niko and constantly tormented him at school, he would physically harm him, spread rumors, etc etc so niko was a complete loner as he grew up. quentin grew out of bullying niko, even started becoming protective of him and genuinely loves him but his treatment caused niko to develop a deep resentment for him and for the foreseeable future, hes pretty much solely focused on making his brother suffer like he did. niko makes a few friends but ends up using them for a revenge scheme against quentin (niko is a TERRIBLE PERSON and betrays the only people who gave a s--- about him because hes a petty piece of s---), he ends up beating the crap out of one of quentins friends after he saw him stealing stuff out of quentins locker and frames an innocent girl for cheating just to inconvenience quentin (the girl wasnt even his girlfriend). other than that hes got a napoleon complex (56 guys rise up) and severe antisocial personality disorder. the story is basically about how niko is a horrible person and repeatedly refuses the kindness others offer to him

Did my character, Lenora, and got 13%.

Id say when looking at her, some people may think shes a Mary Sue, but shes just one of those girly pretty girls, lol. In no cases would I say shes a hero in my story because she got attitude .

Got 22%!!

Ngl, I think it's just because the quiz didn't ask very specific questions relating to her character.

For example, she can transform into a dragon, is a villain cult leader herself, and Is the leader of a war army

Pretty nice 22%

Might as well leave a lil summary for my oc haha! He's an MHA oc, 19 years old, and a sidekick. He has a very powerful healing quirk, which can even bring people back from death of its been led than 5 minutes. (Inspired by the work my mom does as a first responder) His power comes with a big drawback, though. It rapidly drains his energy, in a way that can be fatal. Idk how it will happen yet, but I'm planning for him to be attacked by a villain (cuz what else are you gonna do but beat the s--- out of the healer yk?) Since he isn't great for fighting, he ends up losing and getting a kick ass scar, because they are fun to draw and I have my own scars... Like me, he hates feeling powerless more than anything. And for s---s and giggles I made him 6'2 and gave him the most snatched waist ever lmao

I did this for my spidersona and god 18%, probably based off all the questions that were like does your character look like you/ same age/ same name, from a different universe like yes yes yes because thats the whole point of the spidersonas lmao

15% wow! My oc us born in a cult and during infancy he was mishandled thus he's a cripple, he's frail but talented (he's an insider) and his talents are used by the higher ups in my story so they can lie their way for more power.

I had gotten a 31% on mine.My character is basically a demon but doesn't have that many powers.She also has a scythe for some reason- maybe she found it idk- but anyways she just has like a couple of friends and one of them is her boyfriend,I feel like changing her character a bit though

AYYY 12%!! I'm shocked ngl tho, but not so bad! She's a sleep doll that will only be awaken if you put seven rings in her left arm, and her whole backstory was thought of-

my oc is extremely complex to the point i found it hard to properly answer some questions LOL, got a 15%, not too bad for her. she's definitely overpowered but for a reason + the universe i have her in has become a world of my own in my mind, since the game devs suck ass (racism), she's a branch off of several other ocs that used to be MAJOR mary sues, since i was in fact like 6-7 yrs old i didn't know how to really write ocs that well, this was a fun test to take for sure though! :)

My OC got a 21%, not bad

I'm surprised my character only got 18%

He's a MHA fan character named Koshiro Yuta, he's conventionally attractive: Tall, Long black hair (yes based off of Aizawa), purple eyes (Lavender), Dark academia aesthetic, calm, kind, smart etc. He's in college and isn't a hero or villain, just a normal college student trying to become a doctor. He has a decent quirk, the ability to turn any liquid to a different one (for example being able to turn water to milk or to acid) but he didn't want to be a hero. He wasn't popular but wasn't an outcast, just the smart, attractive guy who kept to himself. Also he wasn't socially anxious, he just didn't go out of his way to talk to people. He likes horror novels and the outdoors (especially during Autumn/Fall) and would read outside or in a caf.

In the story, he's doing his daily schedule and toga spots him reading outside during Autumn/fall. Since he's attractive, she thinks he's hot and likes him along side Deku. But Koshiro is Asexual so the whole story is him trying to go through existence with Toga trying to make him and Deku fall in love with her. They both eventually get kidnapped by her but get saved by class 1-A and Koshiro becomes like an ally and friend to class 1-A (especially Deku). Since he's smart this means Deku and Class 1-A asks him for help with things if Momo and/or Iida can't solve them or she's/He's unavailable. He asks them for help if Toga and ,now since the LOV are after him, the rest of the LOV are trying to kill him.

Since he's smarter than Momo and Iida (not combined!) and is attractive (to me at least) I thought he would've gotten higher.

I got 17%.

This story is hard sci-fi with real science and no FTL.

In the story, "WARFORM", Kyle has his brain frozen in the late 2020s and gets woken up thousands of years later, as an artificial intelligence in control of a warform.

Humanity has been in a war of extermination with an alien civilization for the last 460 years, and humans are losing. The frontlines are now deep into human territory, with the Taust system being contested by the warforms.

The warforms are massive starships equipped with an AI, each of them lobotomized versions of the OG Kyle (referred to in the story as Alpha-Kyle). The beta-Kyles have massive computing power, no self-preservation, no morals, and total obedience to the State. But they lack that *spark* that an unmodified upload of alpha-Kyle would have.

That's where the main character, gamma-Kyle comes in. He fights with the inscrutable alien fleets in strategic, hard sci-fi battles, until he makes an unusual friend...

Took this quiz out of curiosity and got 15% lol. This non-fandom OC, Cedine, ticked all the boxes of having strange eyes and hair, in shape, young (22), and attractive. Her hair (brunette with streaks of white) and eye color (orange and ice blue) are both explained by the use of magic, something that is completely ordinary in her world.

I honestly thought Id get a higher score seeing as she has a rough upbringing and is unusually strong in her abilities. To be fair to myself I made her when I was twelve, and that was eight years ago. She wouldve been like 60% Sue had I not forged her into a balanced character over time. It turns out compassion, tenacity, and a keen sense of justice pair really well with a short temper, recklessness, and a headstrong personality.