harry potter the battle of romance | Comments

Can you PLEASE write with "."s and ","s? Capital characters would help too. If you want it to be even better, try using this: "s when people are talking, okay? Like: "Hey ____! What Are you doing here?" asked Fred. "Yeah, you shouldn't be here. You could get in trouble!" added George. "Wouldn't you be in trouble too?" you ask. They look at each other, then they smile at you. "_____. The teachers here are already used to us" said George. "Now, if they caught you, THEN it's trouble" said Fred.

You got it? It would be less confusing...

I LITERALLY laughed out loud at the Hermione dying thing. XD Sad, but it was just like, so quick... You meant a girl named Hermione Granger. She died of a stress attack that day though.

Why. Did. Hermione. Die?! Not cool!

Good job