Goodbye...part 23 | Comments

Oooh, Ashley is a mastermind afterall. I don't understand how these elf people know her though, and why would they think she was good if they already knew who she is? Or do they just know that she's one of the twins. I don't know, I think one look at Ashley and you can tell she's trouble so I don't think these elf people are very smart. Anyways, I hope these guys aren't strong enough to take on Rosella. Who was the girl who wanted to eat Ashley? Oh well, she'd probably taste too sour anyways. I'm going to say this was a very confusing part, but it is a good starter for Ashley. I'm not quite sure how this will become important but maybe I'm wrong and it's a key part to the story. This was okay, I'm not really used to Ashley's point of view so it's okay. I'd rather read about Rosella though, since she's the main character. This was an okay part though, it wasn't your best but it was good enough. I can't wait for part 24 though, this story keeps on giving questions that I HAVE to find out about.