Don't leave me hanging part 21 | Comments
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I can't believe that Emilia >:( not only did she interupt me and Jack-Jack, but she also won't learn my name.
Masquerade ball?!!? Fuuuunn. I can't wait till I get to that part. XD
These are so interesting and well-written. The plot is great and so are the characters. So far I like both Cory and Jack-Jack about equally! It's so hard to choose T.T hehe, well, onto the next part I go! *skips along to part 22* ^-^
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Next time ill kick Emmys assbuttocks and give her a reason for ruining my almost kiss with Jack! Wow, imway too into this.
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@SimplyDawn mhm Luna is quite the... um... personality... Max would make a good bodyguard, and yes your annoyance toward Emilia is shared by many XP Yup, Jus is pretty reasonable, logical, smart and Kris does care a lot (that would be a cute scene, but yes, drama would ensue violently XP I like the skipping away haha)
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Lumini, hmm... interesting. Youre a very interesting character.
Jack, I'm so shy in front of him. I don't know why. *gets shy and runs out of the room on two different occasions*
Marisa, Goodbye Alpha!
Maxy, I need you to stay with me. Please don't go. I'll keep you as my bodyguard.
Emilia, stop being a punk and grow up already. Damn. That stupid little girlie ruined my moment with Jack. She calls my Jack Jackie? I don't approve it. She's so annoying. She's so mean to me and Justin. Wait.... Is she jealous of me? I think she likes Jack. Its so OBVIOUS.
Justin, i'm so excited that justin too comes with us for the party. I don't know why but i feel safe with him. He's such a smart guy.
Kris, he is so quiet. He always cares about me more than Jack. *sees kris standing leaning against the wall with his arms crossed* *goes straightly to him* *puts my hand around his neck and kisses him for a brief moment* *looks around* *realizes the room is not empty* *runs out of the room skipping*
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THANK YOU I LOVE YOU XXBLUTIXX!!!!
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@ixheartxu well, I might open it up again later if I have space... I'm not sure though
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awwwwwwwww i wish i wouldve read this earlier to make a character!! i just found out bout this series sooo thats why :( ohhh well
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If I have space later one, maybe I'll open it up again, Missy Prissy Cat. Yes! I love creating villains too X) but I don't know why...
Oh, I doubt you're reading this PurpleCherries, but I know a spot I can fit your character in, part 35 though probably :P
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It's cool how you incorporate your audience's ideas into the story. As a writer you always have to listen to your readers. I would write in a character but the whole thing is over and all so... yeah there ya go. If I were to make a character, she's be on the bad side. I have a knack for villains, because they're characters taken to the extreme. Emmy is a bit rude, but I'm not going to cause friction in the team. There's always going to be that one girl/guy who's hard to work with, but you have to try and co-opperate to succeed in your goals. I don't want to get in anyone's face, the only two people I want to see crash and burn are Logan and Blake. "We're not a team... we're a time bomb" ~Bruce Banner/The Hulk~
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Sorry, PurpleCherries :/ the competition is done, but if you'd like I could add that character further on in the story as a minor one?
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I have a good one, I hope I'm not late!
Name: Charlotte Rose (Charlie)
Personal ity: Outgoing, Flirty, Gorgeous
Side: Good
Man: CoryLooks: Long, red hair; fair skinned; grey eyes that turn orange
Dress: short and cute; all red with a red rose at the strap
Mask: orange and yellow (feathers are optional)
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Competition is officially closed now, thanks to angelic4, KaliaRox, AiFiahK3mE, and PersonXD for their characters :)
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@PersonXD great! Thanks :)
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this would be the mask
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and the dress
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just take out the spaces between the ws
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AHHH! I hope I'm not to late, I probably am, but I've got a good one.
NAME: Lacey
PERSONALITY: smart, shy, clutzy, funny, and kind
DRESS: pale pink with gold lace, but not over the to
LOOKS: short, brown hair, a little past shoulders, small body frame, hazel eyes, rosy cheeks, pale skin, and pink lips not sure what she would look like in magic form
MASK: pale pink with gold design
SIDE: good side, cuz evil people scare me
LOVE THE STORY AS ALWAYS!
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Part 22 is out! :) took me 10 days this time? Hm... guess that's not toooo bad...
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@KaliaRox I think I found it ^.^ It's prettyyy
I've got all of the next part typed up :) I just need to put it into the quiz with aswers now
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Aha!I know how to do this now!Okay,look up - grey formal dress - on google image search.It's the one with the blonde girl who's looking away from the camera.It's under the one exquisite evening dress thing.The first one.Thanks!
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Oh gosh, that's a great idea :D
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Layla sounds like a great date for Quincy, thanks again AiFiahK3mE :) I love the name, in this online game I play, my name is actualy a variation of that... everyone's characters sound so good, I want to keep all of them... I was thinking of creating another series (while still continuing ths one) that is from the persective of a girl on the Blake's side, since many of you seem to like at least one of the bad guys, it would let me keep more of these characters being created, and I have lots of deas for more hot guys ;) Tell me your opinions?
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Is it okay with two characters of mine? I'd want Oceana to have Jack, and Layla to have Quincy. I chose the name 'Layla' because it means 'Dark Beauty'(because she's on the 'dark side' XD) :3 Both of the girls are very beautiful, I forgot to say that while describing them... Oceana will be on the good side and Layla on the dark side, okay?
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@KaliaRox No problems :) It was the truth, so... And I hate them too >.> Google's urls are always so long...
@xxbluti xx Yay ^-^ XD I'll create another one then ^-^ Here it goes:
Name: Layla
Physical appearence: Waist-long, jet black hair and emerald green eyes. In her immortal form, she has red... Things, like those Jack and Kris have, but they have purple and Layla has red.
Dress: Long, dark red, and simple. Strapless. She'll be wearing a bracelet, a black one with golden details.
Mask: A golden one. Let's see if I get the link right... h t t p://w w w.madison avemall.com/pro ducts/pro duct.asp ? sk u = M68 0Pa leBl ueVe lvetMa sk The flower in it will be dark red, the same color as the dress.
Personality : Cool, calm and collected. Most of the time. When she's angry, her voice is low, and hints DANGER, which means that you do NOT want to make her REALLy angry. Might be the last thing you do, depending on what.
Date: Quincy (Oceana can have Jack. Oceana will be on the 'good' side and Layla on the 'bad' side, okay?)
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@KaliaRox I couldn't make the urls work :( I'll just work off of your descriptions then...
@TheReckle ssBam Thanks :3 I love reading yours too :D
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I love your quizzes, I'm such a big fan, part 22!
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@xxblutixx:Perfect! Thanks!I hope the URL's will work though.I'm excited now!
@AiFiahK3mE :Thanks!You cheered me up!I hate long URL'S! -_-!!
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