A sixth grade love story (part 1) | Comments

good job, but it did go a little fast. And I agree, this is a little young to set a love story, heck you're only 11/12 when you're in sixth grade, you shouldn't really include things like that. UNLESS you randomly decided to make it a HIGHSCHOOL love story, that'd be different! But it was an alright job, part 2!

Nice job! If u liked this quiz I seriously recommend the quiz new love story: part 1. Just go to sparkles6 and click on the first thing, then click on the quiz I said above. U won't regret it!

did you say he squeezed her butt? sorry but 6th graders shouldnt b doin stuff lik that they aint evn out of elementary school yet.. and you said you wanted us to tell you stuff to improve the quizzes uhm well its pretty hard to understanded it when theres no punctuation or anything cuz it juss goes on and on and stuff but other those 2 things good quiz :)

That was really bad detail and describing. Use better grammar and the story went WAAAAAY too fast.

Needs more detail and slow it down a bit but I like it :) hope part 2 will be out soon

YAY! finally an emo in a love story!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ! and @xXParisXx true 'bout the to short part!!!!!!! and i wtf's w/ the brught happy clothes?!?!?!?!?!?! ?!?!?!?!?! MUST HAVE BLACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!