A heart full of Love part 1 | Comments

Ok. First: PLEASE write using "." and "," 'cause it's confusing when you write "he said hi nd you said hi back and told him your name was Giselle and he told you his nname was.." you get it, right? Second: When someone is talking, use "this", like in 'he said "Hi! My name's ..., and yours?" "Giselle." you answered, you got that too? Good. Third: Don't you think it's a little strange, that it's her first day in her new school, and there's already 4 guys "drooling" over her? Otherwise, this is actually a pretty good quiz :D

Not bad, I don't love it but I don't hate it either, I like it, A lot, but I have seen better, please use correct punctuation in your next one okay or else it sound like indirect speeck. So I know it's your first one so I gave you 8/10! :-p

Thanks for the suggestions

Awesome quiz

Thanks this is my first quiz

This quiz is going to come out maybe friday or saturday

part 2!

part 2 :D