Teenage Chronicle Part 11 | Comments

OMG I love love love Patch! Its so great hes in ma bed! I love your quizzes!

Missy Prissy Cat- Don't think you're all amazing just because you write long paragraphs. Don't you realise you'll never be TRB's favourite?

@TheRecklessBam

Oh My Rowling, are you writing a book? Holy sweet monkey babies are you? Please say yes, I'm totally reading that. Oh right replying thingy, anyways it's not really a chore to compare you to Rowling. You're characters are so rich with mystery and personality. I'm not surprised at all that Aria confuses Ezra for a living person, she's very real in a sense of being and also in a sense of her quirkiness and originality. So can we get back to the part where you said you'd write a book? because I could go on about that for a LONG time. Seriously though, are you writing a book? If you're not, GET ON IT oops sorry I'm getting demanding *sigh* the phsycology of a fangirl. Once ya get demanding you're offically hooked. Anyways, if you ever do write a book I'm so reading that. I'd go all "read this book" to everyone and maybe "READ THIS AMAZINGLICIOUS BOOK" on the side too. I'd possibly add it to my list of favourite books but that's been set in stone for awhile. The only minor addition I've made was the first Hunger Games book (BTW I saw the movie two weeks ago, not bad but we're not talking about that right now) I probably would add it though. I mean I already know the author is beyond awesomeocity standards (yes it's a technical term only I use it but that's beside the point) Ugh I keep getting distracted, POINT IS if you make a book, I'm going to go to the nearest bookstore (which for me is in another town) and buy it WITH MY OWN MONEY. Then I'd buy a few more just so I could say I have more than one copy X). So if you could pretty please with sugar on top, and maybe a cherry, with hot fudge okay now I need a sundae I'm just going to finish this up saying... You deserve to get discovered. Otherwise another stupid book will come out that I have to rant about. Think of the children! You've got to save the children from bad writing! Oh and I smell bestseller too, and now I really need a sundae PEACE OUT and Live long and prosper *does the spock hand*

Make part 12 reckless!!!!!!

@Aria

RIGHT ON RecklessBam is talented enough to be on par with Rowling. I know I've said it before but I wouldn't be surprised if she was the next J.K Rowling. I'm serious. She's clever, descriptive, and dare I say it practically perfect in everyway (kiss it Mary Poppins). I mean writing aside, very humble and dedicated to her fans as well. I can't say the same for all writers but luckily TheRecklessBam doesn't disapoint. If you need any help with that letter you can put this comment in it if you want. I'm sure there's more from all her wonderful fans but yeah you can put this one in too (if you want either way RECKLESSBAM RULES) I hope she gets discovered. If I owned like a giant writing company, she'd be on the job in a milisecond. But since I don't, I'll try to help however I can. Seriously though this girl NEEDS to get discovered. Blow Twilight out of the water, high five Harry Potter, and boogie with Percy Jackson. Go get'im girl!

Okay so I'm back and I've recovered from the stomach flu. Ah, I hate doctors. >.< Anyway, I cannot believe Josh was so ignorant and wasn't willing to understand but it was kind of my fault for not telling them earlier and as I'm writing this comment, I'm surprised of how far you've reached in the series. ANYWHO, Why did i tell him I kissed Jake? Didn't I know he was going to get very upset? I'm actually elated that Patch didn't join in and say anything because of Josh and Patch BROMANCE xD But I know if I was josh and I saw jake, I'd be pretty pissed too because what josh thinks is that Jake took Katherine away. If I was Josh, I would've wanted to slap the girl, at least he didn't. I completely agree with Josh's reaction but I'm completely in love with Patch. I think you should transfer all of this into a book and sell one and if you get a lot for that book, keep printing and selling because I know I WILL buy the books and read the quizzes at the same time. That's how awesome you are. You have no idea how much you have made me smile. Of course, you are my sister for live, along with singin234. When Josh asked me if I felt anything between "us" my heart broke to pieces. He must know it's hard to choose when there's so many wonderful guys. I feel so sorry for Calisto still. I mean, if MY mom was dead, I'll follow her because everyone has to appreciate what they have before its too late! =D My comment was erased so...I had to make a next one!

Ah! The limit, I hate that crap. You have no idea how much people are asking me who you are since I wrote that essay on you. Btw, I'm planning on showing your work to J.K. Rowling when I'm writing my letter to her. She will be stunned and you'll be discovered, hopefully. You're my role model and will be FOREVER. Pickles and cucumbers aren't so delicious so I can't put them on my favourite list. Haha, I'm going to say it again. You made these series seem so realistic that my parents tell me my best friend isn't Ezra and I'm not in love with Patch in real but the last one is TRUE! I'M IN LOVE WITH PATCH. I don't care how much I know about him because I know he'll be the one! He's always there to comfort me and I'm grateful for that. I LOVE YOU LOADS PATCH! >:)

Okay so I'm back and I've recovered from the stomach flu. Ah, I hate doctors. >.< Anyway, I cannot believe Josh was so ignorant and wasn't willing to understand but it was kind of my fault for not telling them earlier and as I'm writing this comment, I'm surprised of how far you've reached in the series. ANYWHO, Why did i tell him I kissed Jake? Didn't I know he was going to get very upset? I'm actually elated that Patch didn't join in and say anything because of Josh and Patch BROMANCE xD But I know if I was josh and I saw jake, I'd be pretty pissed too because what josh thinks is that Jake took Katherine away. If I was Josh, I would've wanted to slap the girl, at least he didn't. I completely agree with Josh's reaction but I'm completely in love with Patch. I think you should transfer all of this into a book and sell one and if you get a lot for that book, keep printing and selling because I know I WILL buy the books and read the quizzes at the same time. That's how awesome you are. You have no idea how much you have made me smile. Of course, you are my sister for live, along with singin234. When Josh asked me if I felt anything between "us" my heart broke to pieces. He must know it's hard to choose when there's so many wonderful guys. I feel so sorry for Calisto still. I mean, if MY mom was dead, I'll follow her because everyone has to appreciate what they have before it's too late. I'm silently falling for Josh though even though he was EXTREMELY angry at me. I wonder where the ring is though and I realise a lot of people have been wondering the same thing. Do I still have it? Or did I lose it? TheRecklessBam, you do know that I'm your BIGGEST NUMBER ONE fan right? I'll support you no matter what happens. Even if you started to take drugs and be all crack and stuff, I'll support you because all those things are part of life. I don't care about anyone else and if they don't agree with me because it's my opinion and I'll stand by it as long as I live.

@TRB thanks. I really like this though, so I guess that's why I did it!

@angelic4- patch and I are already married and we made the unbreakable vow to stay together XD

Why must you do this to me?!?!?!?!? D: Poor Josh, I'm dying inside!!!!! Josh, I'm sorry babe! I don't even like Jake! Pretty please forgive me! :'( But then I'm also really happy because Patch was there for me. I love all the guys so much, but I love Josh and Patch the most.

This is awesome! Make the next one soon please!!!!!

Am i the only one who doesn't put long paragraphs. Well *cries* omg Josh i am so sorry i didn't twll you about me and Jake, at least here out the truth please, btw he said the girl i love, so Josh does love me, Patch nowonder he is the one for me, he's amzing in every way and understands me, as his future wife he has the right to the other side of the bed xD

@TRB I hope you read this but I went over you quizzes in comments and I relized I had not put in a comment much. Only in part 14, i did my 1st comment. Then in part 29, i put another. Then pat 30. After that I put comments in T.C part 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 and this part 11. I have read all of them but I dont know why but I feel really bad of not putting comments in those other parts. So I just want to tell you that I have always been readint them and I am sorry that I didn't comment. Your amazing and I wish I did put something. So I feel like I should say sorry "sorry" I cant wait for the next part! Dont ask me why I posted this, I have no idea myself.

AH! My eyes were glued to the screen during this quiz. So good. I think you hit right on the target of Josh's character. His reaction was so true that I wouldn't be surprised if that actually happened in real life. Actually, this story is so believable (well minus the magic etc) and the characters really come to life for me, I can't believe how utterly stupendous (because I overuse the word amazing XP) your stories really are, I love love love your writing TRB! *sigh* I love Patch... but now I'm feeling sympathetic for Josh, and I've always liked Alex, and Calisto's always been up there, and Adam and Jack are making their ways up there... why do you make such impossibly great guy choices? XD Oh and I forgot about the goddess thing, so cool ;D

I agree Missy Prissy Cat, you always bring up the best, most intuitive points

@singin234 well if you are weird, I'm just as weird as you because I was bouncing with excitement when I saw this part was out XP

@Miss Prissy cat okay. Yeah I am a sucker for Shiny things too!! :)

@singin234

THANK YOU! But don't feel bad, like I said it is just a normal reaction. My point was he wasn't a jerk in that situation at all. In fact the only way he could be a jerk was if he did something REALLY extreme. Like hurt someone out of anger. THAT would be jerky (and a little worrisome). Anyways, I'm sure this'll all clear up, "There's three things in this world that can't be hidden for long: The sun, The moon, and The truth." (yes that's a quote from somewhere I'm not THAT smart I just have a good memory) Oh yeah also I agree with you on the ring part. WTF happened to it? You can't lose something like that, regardless if it came from a vending machine or not. It was really pretty too (yeah I'm a sucker for shiny things, but what are ya gonna do?)

Okay now with the Josh thing I agree with Missy Prissy cat. BUT NOW I FEEL REALLY, REALLY, REALLY BAD

My reaction for the whole quiz: AWWWWKKWAAARDDD

Ye ah okay this was the most nerve racking quiz of the series. But I really REALLY have to say something. *sighs* I agree with Josh THERE I SAID IT. The whole time I could see why he was mad at me, he wasn't acting like a jerk he had every right to be mad. Like first of all, he finds out I've been lying to him the whole time. That's not good in ANY relationship. Second, when he first saw Jake it was natural for him to pin him against a wall. I mean if Erika walked in the room you'd pin her to the wall too. Thirdly, I know he cares for the main character girl. Asking if she had kissed Jake was a normal question, in fact I'm pretty sure he was expecting her to say no. Of course we all know she'd be a bigger liar wouldn't she? Yeah she's kissed him, and you know what I'm not mad at Josh at all. I mean if I found out that one of the guys was having a secret relationship with Erika and that he kissed her I'd be pissed off. Granted I know Jake isn't Erika but in Josh's eyes he's exactly the same as her. The only kind of jerkiness I got from him was the fact that he didn't give the main character a chance to explain everything. Honestly, if I were in his place I wouldn't want to hear it. I mean Josh believes one story while everyone else believes another, he's just trying to hold onto some sanity here people. If everyone was saying the sky is actually red you'd think everyone had gone nuts too. So yeah, I completely agree with Josh in this quiz. You can say whatever you want about Josh being a jerk, but in the current circumstances his reaction is completely normal. Now I don't know if he's going to hold onto this little grudge of his but I wouldn't doubt it. BTW Calisto was already pissed. I mean he's already punched an oven I don't think he would've been pissed if Jake had just waltzed in on any other day. C'mon he just found out his mom's dead, I'd get mad at anything. Ex. HEY U ATE MA CEREAL!!! *slaps* You see what

This was amazing! Josh does have a right to be mad, but I think he overreacted a little bit. Just a tad. Patch is an awesome person, I love him! Can't wait for the next one!

Kind of lonely without Tyler and Max. When they are going to come back? And please don't kill Tyler.

*keeps staring at the screen* you got to be kidding me........ *curses in spanish and nay kind of language* WHY DO YOU HAVE TO PUT THE FREAKIN DRAMA HERE!!!!!!!!!! GAHHHHH! *mentaly slaps face* ok.... I LOVE NEMO TOO! :3

Jake wasn't in there alot. But Patch!!!! YOU MAKING ME LIKE HIM MORE!! Okay I like Jake and Patch now. Josh just isn't understanding, I can't blame him. Josh needs time to think, I guess. At lest Patch wasn't mad but I can't help but wonder about Jake. This was AMAZING. You better have the next one about soon!! Your an amazing writer!! Your one of my FAV Writers!!! I think everyone will like Patch a little more now. I have asked this before on part something but what happen to the ring. Who has it?!? I feel bad for Josh!! Well make the next one VERY SOON!! When I saw this was like I was jumping up an now with joy! I do that Every time, it makes me feel happy! (wow I am werid right) :)